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The Secret & Hunting Virgins: Two Short Stories by Wayne Hawk: I Read It So You Don’t Have To

The Secret & Hunting VirginThe Secret & Hunting Virgins:
Two Short Stories

by Wayne Hawk

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Publisher: Page Publishing
Publication Date: September 10, 2020
Format: Paperback
Length: 80 pg.
Read Date: May 9, 2024

What’s The Secret & Hunting Virgin About?

These are two short stories, sort of linked by protagonists purporting to possess some unique spiritual role/status. They’re thrillers best described as a mix of realism and SF/Fantasy. That’s really all I can think of to link them.

The Secret

This story follows a man who cannot keep a secret as he takes a road trip to visit his father one last time before he dies. At his father’s deathbed, he learns a secret that will change the world. Somehow surviving a hail of bullets that don’t prevent him from learning this secret, he’s instead imprisoned on trumped-up charges and put into solitary confinement (while never explaining why the government doesn’t use one more bullet once there’s a clear shot). Will he be able to outwit the guards and other prison officials to broadcast this secret?

Hunting Virgins

This is both an experiment into how often—and in how many ways—the word “virgin” can be used in a 33-page story as well as the story of a team of hard-partying hazardous-tree removal experts. At some point, their leader has a religious conversion and leaves this profession to start a church on the other side of the U.S.

A decade later, he returns with an offer too good to be true (literally). He recruits his old team—plus his beautiful and virtuous daughter who shouldn’t be anywhere near these louts—to go with him to a portion of Siberia to clear part of a forest heretofore untouched by logging in exchange for a small fortune. Why Russian loggers are incapable of doing this for far less, we’re not told. Nor why any company thinks that logging in an area so difficult to get to makes any sense at all, especially when the expenses incurred to do that are so large.

But maybe their dangerous profession and the well-known hardships of the Siberian climate aren’t the most deadly things that lay in wait for them…

So, what did I think about The Secret & Hunting Virgin?

I honestly can’t tell you which story made me angrier—the plots were disappointing, unoriginal, and somehow nonsensically inexplicable at the same time. The characters were utterly unlikeable at best and contemptible (in an uninteresting way) most of the time. The writing was dry and uncompelling—and the ineptness of the prose was only challenged by its lack of clarity for the least appealing part of it.

The ways that Christian—or pseudo-Christian and near gnostic—ideas are scattered throughout these two stories are just as off-putting as the rest of the elements of this writing. I can’t tell if Hawk is really trying to tell stories with Christian themes* or if he’s just using the trappings of those themes the way that Pierce Brown uses the trappings of the Roman Empire to tell his stories. Either way, he fails.

* I’m using Christian in the broadest and most watered-down possible sense here.

“The Secret” features a couple of people with delusions of grandeur comparing themselves to Apostles to bring the world one of the tiredest ideas this side of Whitley Strieber. I wondered a few times if I’d have liked it more if Hawk hadn’t tried to compress the events into such a short space, but had developed them fully and let them breathe. But I just don’t see any evidence that he’s capable of doing that. He spent more time on this than he should’ve.

“Hunting Virgins” is even worse—these tree-removal experts have the maturity of the main characters of the 80s Porky’s films* and should be trusted with power tools to the same extent. There’s nothing about them that says megacorporations should shower them with money to do anything—and when things start to go wrong for them, there’s nothing about the situation to make the reader care.

* I can’t believe that I remembered these things existed, either. Or that anyone ever used the word “film” to describe them with a straight face.

Why did I finish? I was curious—and the book is crazy short. Also, I spent enough money on this volume that I couldn’t let myself just walk away. I regret the whole thing and hope I’ve convinced you to avoid this experience.


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LITERARY LOCALS: A Q&A About Writing in Idaho with Melaney Taylor Auxier

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This is going to look a little different than most of these posts, Auxier took my first round of questions and mashed them into a few paragraphs. I did ask some follow-ups that I didn’t think worked as well if I tried to incorporate them into those paragraphs, so you’re getting a hodge-podge I guess. It’s basically a nice monologue that I interrupt a few times.


Great questions! I’m just going to jump right in and go for it.
My parents were married 3 months out of high school and 9 months later started having a family. In order to support us, my dad joined the military. The Navy took us from CA to SC, with Illinois being ‘homebase’ of sorts since mom and dad both had family there. After 7years in the Navy, dad worked for an international company that moved us every 2-3 years. I’ve lived in 8 states and Europe, graduating HS from an international school in The Netherlands. I associate each place with a specific local food, lol! I would definitely say all these places play a part in my writing. I have now lived in Idaho for 20 years, so while not a native, I do love being here. I love the view of the mountains in all the seasons, sometimes snow-covered, or silhouetted in sunrise and sunset. It never gets old. I’m always in awe. Seeing elk in the wild fascinates me too. I love to watch them.

Yeah, probably not technically a native, but that’s long enough to get you honorary native status, right? What kind of food would you associate with Idaho? (or does that only work with the nations you lived in?)
The food I associate with Idaho, or at least my part of Idaho has changed since I first got here. There was this little Mom and Pop burger and shake place that we had to hit up if someone came to visit, if we were celebrating, or just out running errands on a Saturday, lol! But it has since changed hands, I’ve had to give up gluten and dairy, and it just isn’t the same. So now I’d have to say huckleberries. Since we’ve been here so long, we know where and when to pick them and load up the freezer bags to eat them all through the winter months in our own homemade df/gf baked goods and shakes.

I feel like I’ve been a storyteller my whole life. There were great negative consequences in my family for telling a lie but writing (or telling) a story for ‘entertainment’ was okay. I loved writing assignments in school. I would write my own song lyrics or mini stories in a tiny ‘office’ I made in my closet, complete with a tin can pencil holder. Back then, an author to me was like a movie star or a president or something. I didn’t know just anyone could become an author, that you could actually go to college to learn to write. I imagined authors were like, appointed or something or you were just born an author but that it was something ordinary me couldn’t be. This did not stop me from writing my stories, though.

Fast forward through many moves, a couple husbands, 6 kids, lots of animals, and I finally figured out anyone can be an author!
How long have you been publishing? What was it that made you take that step?
I think the timing was just right. For years I went to conferences, classes, tutorials, read writing books, etc. I was in my first critique group of very talented mentors. We believed traditional publishing was the only real way to publish a book. But when that disbanded, I queried agents only to be rejected because my books were ‘too quiet’, not edgy, no one died of a horrible disease, no abuse and I didn’t cater to what was ‘hot’ in the market at the time. (like werewolves and vampires) My current critique group got together and our computer genius talked to us about Amazon’s KDP. She said, I think I can do this. (meaning the uploading) So she taught me how to use Canva for my illustrations in my picture books and covers for my novels, worked her magic for the longer books uploading all those words and ta-da! I fulfilled a dream of being a published author. I wasn’t getting any younger, I was tired of waiting for a bunch of 20-somethings to decide what the next hot topic was going to be to force upon readers. So I write what I want, do my own marketing (which you have to do whether you are traditionally published or indie), set my own release dates. I have a great support system and it keeps it fun and exciting.

I have a weekly critique group I faithfully attend with a couple other authors that I have been friends with for many years. We each have a role in the group that highlights our strengths. One is great with story consistency and description, another is our computer genius. I am the grammar and punctuation police. We were all once a part of a bigger critique group that has since disbanded for various reasons. But we took away the foundation of that group into this one and are very productive because of it. If any author would like tips on setting up their own critique group, they can reach out to me through my website melaneytaylorauxier.com I’m always happy to share pointers and tips with other writers.
Oh, I love the idea of a critique group with specialties like that!

Small town Idaho definitely plays a big part in my middle grade and adult fiction. It’s a recurring setting that just inserts itself into my brainstorming sessions. Just about anything can spark an idea for a new book. The main character of my picture book “Don’t Judge O’dell by his Smell” was inspired by an actual stinkbug standing on its head as I did laps on the trail around our property a couple summers ago. The house that John lives in, in my book “Not Jingleheimer”, is based on a 100 year old home in my own small Idaho town.

I generally have more than one project going at a time. Currently I’m finishing up a (hopefully) humorous adult fiction. I have 3 picture books I’m working on, as well as a plot outline for another middle grade, and a play adaptation of my adult fiction, “Bad Coffee and Paws in Your Face.” It’s always good to have something else to work on when you get stuck on your current story.

I love participating in author events. I like meeting the other local authors and chatting with them. I like meeting the avid readers. There is always something new to learn by listening to others. It’s a wonderful surprise to hear from someone, “This is my child’s favorite book!” or “I bought your books online but I don’t have this new one! I have to get it!”

I have my full library of books on my website and on Amazon. My biggest surprise so far was when I randomly sold a book to someone in the UK! No idea who it is! But how exciting to see that on my Amazon sales.
I bet!

If I can tell a story that brings a smile or a chuckle out of someone or simply entertains them for a little while, I’m a happy author.

One final question, is there a book (or two…or 18, if you get really carried away), that embodies Idaho/the Idaho spirit to you to recommend to my readers?
I’ve tried to find Idaho-based books to send as gifts over the years and the ones that get all the hype are not what I’d consider the best. I’m not usually a big fan of Romance but I love the way author Sarah Hill incorporates small town Idaho into her books. ‘Since You’ and ‘Caterpillars in Glass Jars’ are a good example of this.

Margaret Fuller has a set of trail books and identifying Idaho berries and such that she has done extensive research for. For any outdoor enthusiasts, these are a must-have.

And I’d have to say, ‘(NOT) Jingleheimer’ , my middle grade fiction, is a fun book based in Idaho that is great for young readers or the young at heart, good for a chuckle or 2.

I do have a question for you, HC. I’d love to know how you got your name for your website. I’ve come up with my own theory but only you know the real story (wink)
I’m curious about your theory, of course. 🙂 There was a webcomic called Unshelved that several years ago had a strip about teaching kids to read irresponsibly (they even had a tshirt to that effect that I really lament not getting). It was just a phrase that stuck in my head. Basically, it’s about reading things I’m interested in, not what “I’m supposed to” read. What Alan Noble describes as reading based on whimsy.
When I first saw ‘Unshelved’ it made me think ‘crazy for books’ in a good way. If we didn’t have avid readers, there’d be no need for avid writers. I love those words, ‘Reading based on whimsy’.

Thanks for your time and participation!
Thanks for the questions! That was fun!


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LITERARY LOCALS: A Q&A About Writing in Idaho with Steve McGill

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I had the pleasure of meeting McGill and having a brief conversation with him at the recent Library Book Fair–and am now happy to bring you this look at writing in Idaho from a relatively recent arrival.


Before we get into things, why don’t you give the reader a brief introduction to you and your work.
I’m a veteran teacher. I taught elementary grades for the first eight years of my career; for the next eighteen, I taught middle school. I’m now a professor of English at San Joaquin Delta College in Stockton, California, where I’ve been an instructor for twenty-five years. I wrote “The Cave” in 2008. It was an exciting time for me, attending book signings at places like Barnes and Noble and Borders Book stores. I published “No Father No Son” in 2022. It’s interesting that when I honestly answer the question, “What’s it about,” with the reply, “It’s the sad story of a boy’s childhood and how he copes,” people get very quiet.

What brought you to Idaho in the first place? What is it about Idaho that keeps you here?
I lived in California all my life until I moved to Idaho in January 2023. California has so much beauty, but it also has so much filth. The beauty is nature, and the filth is anything but nature. The filth stems from human interaction. It’s somewhat political in nature, but there’s more to it. Much more.

Are you tied into some sort of local author/bookish group/culture? If so, tell us about it
and how it helps you as an author. If you’re not, is there a reason for it?

I am not a part of a book club or group. The reason is that any club I’ve joined in the past tends to consist of less than serious readers. My experience with “intellectuals” is saturated with ego.

What kind of events in the area do you attend—either to sell/promote your books or to network with authors? Are there any outside of this area that you hit regularly and wish we had something like it here?
No for the same reason.

What’s the breakdown of your audience—do you have a strong local base, or are your readers from other parts of the world?
Most of my readers have been adults who enjoy an adventure story. Ironically, most of the readers of my young reader novel are adults.

Do you think there are particular challenges or advantages to being a writer in the Treasure Valley? (possibly both)
I hope the Treasure Valley consists of communities that are still readers, but social media has attracted even some of the most avid readers. There’s a vast difference between the experience found in deep reading and the experiences of cheap, shallow reading found online.

Do you bring Idaho (or some sort of Idaho-sensibility, assuming one exists) to your work? Whether or not anyone else sees it, can you look at some aspect of your writing and think “That’s Idaho” or “I would do ____ differently if I was a Kentuckian or from Illinois?”
I’ve only been in Idaho for a bit longer than a year, so the question may not apply.

One final question, is there a book (or two…or 18, if you get really carried away), that embodies Idaho/the Idaho spirit to you to recommend to my readers?
See the previous answer.

Thanks for your time and participation!


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LITERARY LOCALS: A Few Quick Questions with…Shared Stories

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This is overdue (as you can tell from some of the dated references), but sometimes schedules don’t work the way you want (and when you throw in the vicissitudes and orneriness of technology…things take even longer). A few weeks back, a new bookstore opened in Caldwell, ID–filling the lacuna left last year when Rediscovered Books had to close its branch. As you can imagine, I’m very happy to see Shared Stories open up–I actually ended up buying 1+ books there for the first three weeks they were open. Thankfully, life has intervened and I’ve been unable to make it there since. But I’ll be back very soon. I was able to ask Dr. Jocele Skinner, the owner, a few questions about their opening, plans, and so on. I hope this is the first of many times you see me mention them in the years to come.


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Let’s start off with a brief description of Shared Stories—how would you describe it (other than Caldwell/Canyon County’s newest bookstore). What makes you distinct? (at least in your mind/vision for the future)
Shared Stories is a new independent bookstore in Caldwell. It is woman-owned by Jocele Skinner, a local family physician. Her husband George Decker manages the day to day operations. We live locally and have been in the community for many years. We hope that what will make Shared Stories successful is that we are wholly committed to Caldwell and the surrounding area. Our goal is to work with local individuals, businesses, and organizations to support and to build our community. We live here. We work here. We spend our own dollars here. We want to share our love of books with Caldwell and see Caldwell and Canyon County grow and thrive even more than it already is!
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What inspired you to open this store? Has it been a lifelong dream, or just one that’s come around in the last few years? Was there one thing in particular that motivated you to get into action now?
George and I have always been book nerds! Our first date was at a bookstore. I think a lot of readers have a dream of working in or owning a bookstore. For many years, that’s exactly what it was – a dream. Jocele was busy working crazy hours, and George was at home with our kids and farm animals. When Rediscovered Books closed in Caldwell, we were devastated, but after a lot of discussion, we decided maybe it was really time to turn the fantasy into reality, and to hopefully fill what we saw as a huge need in downtown Caldwell.
We were pretty devastated, too–but you actually did something about it. Thank you!

I cannot fathom how much work had to go into getting the store to this stage—you’ve posted some on your Instagram page-—but how long have you actively been pursuing this once you moved from the “one day, I’d like to open…” thought to “let’s actually do this” stage?
It definitely has been a fair amount of work getting things up and going. We made the decision to proceed with opening a store in late June/early July of 2023. It took us about 5 months to find and secure the perfect location. It also took a ridiculous amount of time to come up with a name that we liked. I don’t even know how many options we tried out before Shared Stories stuck! Once we signed the lease in December, then we could really start making plans. We ordered custom shelves in January from a local business in Middleton. We went to Winter Institute (the national conference for the American Bookseller Association) in February, and after that we started working on ordering books, merchandise, etc. We began interviewing for bookseller positions in mid to late February, and I think managed to put together a great team. The books took a couple of weeks longer to get here than we had planned, so that was frustrating and held up our opening for a bit, but I think in the end it was all worked out! One thing that has been amazing is the support and help we have received from bookstores near and far! Bruce and Laura Delaney and their staff [of Rediscovered Books] have been so helpful in teaching us some of the basics, and the book-selling community has been nothing but encouraging and excited for us. I would also be remiss without thanking Ofelia Morales at the Caldwell economic developing office for being so incredible to work with and for helping get us connected with our eventual landlord and downtown businesses.
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How was the first week? I know when I stopped in on Friday it was busier than I expected/feared. But that’s a limited 30 minutes—you know the big picture.
I think overall the first week went better than we had anticipated. We had our soft opening April 10, and quite a few people came in and made purchases. We appreciate their grace while we all worked to streamline our processes. We had a couple of slower days after the initial burst, but are getting busier each day. We’re hoping as the weather gets nicer and there are more events and people downtown in the plaza, that sales will continue to climb.

You’ve certainly had to learn a lot along the way, and encountered things you probably hadn’t considered. What were some of the biggest surprise challenges. Also, what was surprisingly easiest?
We still have lots to learn. 2 weeks in we’re still trying to figure out the best way to streamline orders and to determine what customers are interested in. We tried to build a pretty broad selection when we created out initial book order, but there’s always books that we didn’t predict would be in high demand. And of course, there’s only so many books we can fit on the shelves. It would have been awesome if we could have ‘nailed it” on day one, but we’re hoping that will come with time. If you are looking for something you don’t see, ask us! We want this to be a place where there’s something for everyone.
Shared Stories Comfy Reading Area

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Are you working on plans for the future of Shared Stories—or is keeping the lights on your primary focus for now? Do you have any events coming up that you’d like to share?
We’re definitely working on plans and future events going forward. Right now, we’re definitely focused on just continuing to get our feet under us, but we’re looking at starting store-sponsored book clubs in the next month or two, as well as some special events. This weekend is Independent Bookstore Day, so we’ll be having some fun specials and giveaways on Saturday. We’re partnering with Shutter Happy, a local photographer, for a children’s reading program over the summer, where kids can get discounts on books and win a mini-photography session here in the store. We’re also partnering with another downtown business for a Mother’s Day tea and book event. Watch our social media for updates. Children’s activities/storytime is starting soon, and there may be some fun game nights, crafts nights, and more ahead!

What books are you (and/or your staff) enjoying hand-selling the most right now? Feel free to give a quick pitch for a few—I can’t let people get away from here without a few recommendations.
It’s been fun to be able to hand-sell books to customers as they come in! Our staff all have different readings tastes, and so we are learning from each other all the time too! Probably our biggest seller has been The Women by Kristin Hannah. I am also surprised by how many are interested in reading the classics. A couple of other books that have sold well so far are the Wildwood Chronicles by Colin Meloy, the Inspector Gamache series by Louise Penny, and a whole host of romance and fantasy novels, led by Fourth Wing and A Court of Thorns and Roses.

Some bookstores have resident dogs, many more seem to have store cats. But you all have taken a different direction–one that I absolutely love. Tell us about Cedric. Where did the idea come from? Who came up with it? Are people responding as well to it as I am? When can we purchase Cedric merch?
Good question. We had initially planned on having a store cat. But honestly, all our cats at home have bad manners, so they aren’t suited for being in the store. One dog is too big and sheds too much, and our other dog gets a little anxious around new people, so neither one of them would be great store pets, either. As for Cedric, not long after we opened, a young man came in asking if we’d be interested in stocking 3D printed dragons. Sutton lives locally and does a great job printing dragons and fidget spinners. George, always a sucker for cool shiny things, bought one just as a trial, and our amazing and creative staff took the dragon and ran with it!  Before we knew it, the dragon had a name and was showing up on social media. It’s a fun way to feature new books or special displays. The dragons have been super successful, and we’ve had requests for custom colors and have already had to reorder. Kids young and old find them fascinating. And really aren’t most of us book dragons at heart?
Shared Stories' Cedric

A few snips I took of various Social Medial posts to try to give a flavor of how he’s being used. They look much better in the originals.

 

I know this is a crazy busy time for you all right now, and I cannot thank you enough for taking time to respond to me.
I just want to thank everyone for supporting our store so far. The excitement and support has been so fun to see, and we all enjoy sharing our favorite books with you, as well as finding new books ourselves. I mentioned above we are happy to place special orders, and you can also support us by shopping at our affiliate locations:

For physical books: https://bookshop.org/shop/sharedstories
For audio books: https://libro.fm/sharedstories
Yes–absolutely do that, readers!


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Grandpappy’s Corner: Panda Pat and the Rat Called Cat by Neil Ballard, Steven Nosov (Illustrator): A Nice Rodent with an Unfortunate Nickname

Grandpappy's Corner Panda Pat and the Rat Called Cat

Panda Pat and the Rat Called Cat

by Neil Ballard, Steven Nosov (Illustrator)

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Publication Date: December 23, 2020
Format: Hardcover
Length: 36 pgs.
Read Date: April 19, 2024
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What’s Panda Pat and the Rat Called Cat About?

This is the story about, well—it’s there in the title. Mostly, it’s about Cat, with his pal, Pat, playing a good supporing role (with Pat getting the lead-off position in the title, I assumed he’d be the focus, but he isn’t—and that might just be me).

Cat got his moniker as an insult, really—no rat gets nicknamed that as a sign of respect or friendship. So he wants to avoid those people who gave him that name. But he eventually has to go to the city for supplies, but his buddy, Pat, tags along for moral support.

While there, Cat enters a race, enticed by the prospect of winning a cheese trophy (and really, who wouldn’t want a cheese trophy no matter their species?). A little comedy, a little humility, and some chaos ensue.

Let’s Talk about the Art for a Minute

This is the first time that Nosov has illustrated a children’s book—and it better not be his last. Even before I talked to Ballard about the book at a Book Fair, I knew I was going to buy it based on the cover. The rat called Cat looks like a character from a video game I played forever ago—he’s not, but it felt like that when I saw him. Just an instant click. And Pat is almost as good.

The art is the clear star of this book—with all due respect to Ballard—it’s engaging, it’s energetic, it’s cute, it’s striking. In case I’m not being clear—I’m a fan.

There are some samples of this book on his website, but not all the images there are really kids-book-appropriate (there’s nothing scandalous or anything, just figured I should make the disclaimer). You can also see them on this tweet.

How is it to Read Aloud?

It’s fine. Some of the sentences are a little cumbersome to read aloud—nothing major, but there’s no real rhythm or zip to the writing. The text is just to convey the narrative, not to steal the limelight or tickle the listener. The story and the art are the stars of this book—which is fine, I should stress.

So, what did I think about Panda Pat and the Rat Called Cat?

It’s a fun story elevated by the eye-catching illustrations. There’s a little bit of a lesson—maybe even two—but nothing that will hit you over the head with the moral if you’re not in the mood to focus on it with your listener.

Also, whoever did the typesetting/interior design should get some kudos—it pops off the page in just the right way.

Ballard indicated that a sequel is in progress—I’ll gladly grab it when I see it.

Good characters, a nice story, and there’s no way the little reader in your life doesn’t like the art—this is one to add to your shelves, for sure.

3 Stars

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LITERARY LOCALS: 2nd Annual Treasure Valley Book Fair/Book Haul

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This past weekend, the Nampa Public Library hosted the The 2nd Annual Treasure Valley Book Fair and I wanted to take a minute or two to talk about it.

One thing they did this year was provide everyone who walked in a Passport with the names of every author present. If you got a stamp from every author, you got a free book from…I don’t know where they got this selection–but it was a pretty good one. I got a hardcover of Lee Child’s 61 Hours. The downside to this is that there were several people that just came by, got a stamp, and moved on. My daughter and I had a conversation of a decent length with all of them—and were interrupted more than once by someone just wanting that. It’s kind of a shame, because you could tell that too many people just out for that (we actually had to be reminded more than once by an author to get a stamp—we’d just get distracted by whatever we were talking about). We had some great conversations—too many. We spent about 4 hours at an event we’d planned on attending for 90 minutes. I’d have gladly talked to many of these authors for longer than we did.

We didn’t see nearly as many returning authors as we’d hoped (there was an event in Boise that some of them attended). The cool part of that was that there were many that we got to meet for the first time. I’ve already talked to some about showing up here—and will be reaching out to as many of the others as I can in the next few days.

All in all, it was a great event with a large range of genres, target audiences, and authors represented (which was pretty encouraging) and one I hope is repeated again and again.

Now, I can’t be expected to show up to an event like that and walk away empty handed can I? Were not for a budget (that I stretched to the limit) the stack could’ve been taller. I do have a shopping list of some of the left overs.
NPL Indie Fair Book Haul
(once again, I display my questionable photographic skills).

So much for the progress I’ve made on Mt. TBR this year.

I, again, really enjoyed getting to talk to all of the authors there. Here are the social media (and/or way to order the books of) everyone that I could find. Do yourself a favor and check these authors out!

bullet @artmuseum.edu – zines, etc.
bullet Melaney Taylor Auxier—Children’s, Middle Grade, and Adult Fiction
bullet Neil Ballard—Picture books
bullet Terri Bentley—Historical Romance
bullet Patricia Carroll—Christian thrillers
bullet Erica Dansereau—Christian Romance and Rom-Coms
bullet Death Rattle—Poetry, Zines, and More
bullet Echo Artwork—Pottery, Stickers, and Zines
bullet Jerome Goettsch—Vietnam memoirist
bullet Wayne Hawk—Thriller writer
bullet Sarah Hill—Contemporary Romance
bullet Britt Howard—Christian Romance
bullet Julie Howard—Historical Fiction, Crime Fiction, Supernatural, and probably many other genres before the year is out
bullet Laura Jenski—Cozy Mysteries
bullet Lori Josifek—Christian Children’s Books
bullet Katherine Ecrivain Joy—Christian Children’s Books
bullet Nathan Keys—(big, chonky) Fantasy
bullet Elliott P. Linker—Comic Books for Kids by a Kid (so good to see him again)
bullet Susan Lowe—writer of a story of survival
bullet Kataya Moon—Romance, Fantasy, Erotica, Sci Fi
bullet Patrik Martinet—Fantasy and Crime (with a hint of UF)
bullet Wendy Ann Mattox—Christian Children’s Books
bullet Steve McGill—dark, intense Contemporary Fiction
bullet Rachelle Nelson—YA Fantasy
bullet Christin Nogle—Horror with a touch of Sci Fi
bullet Carla Crane Osborne—Children’s Books (okay, didn’t actually talk to her, she couldn’t make it, but someone who works for her was there–and she was a great spokesperson)
bullet Debra Peck—Non-fiction
bullet Amy Maren Rice—MG Fantasy. One of the first people I met last year, the first person we talked to this year. Really great to see her.
bullet Robin Chadwick Rundle—Historic Romance
bullet R.M. Scott—YA Dark Fantasy
bullet Bonnie Schroeder—Women’s Contemporary Fiction
bullet Nicole Sharp—”Writer of Love, Coffee, Italy and Fearless Women”
bullet Norelle Smith—Fiction, Christian Fiction
bullet Julie Weston—Historical Mysteries
bullet Nancy Weston—Contemporary Fiction
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Teaching Moments by Troy Lambert: A Tale of Horse Thieves and a Serial Killer

Teaching MomentsTeaching Moments

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Series: Max Boucher Mysteries,  #2
Publisher: Unbound Media
Publication Date: January 18, 2022
Format: Paperback
Length: 368
Read Date: August 24-26, 2023
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What’s Teaching Moments About?

It seems that after the events of Harvested, Max Boucher has developed a specialty when it comes to his PI work—animals. Granted, most of these are pretty small cases without a lot of excitement, but work is work, right? And if he’s getting the bills paid, he can spend more time thinking about the new evidence he found at his old home at the end of Harvested.

But that’s for another time, really. Max has been hired to leave Seattle and come to Cedar Peak—a small town in Idaho*, where someone from out of town sticks out like a sore thumb. He’s been called upon to investigate a missing—presumed stolen—horse, worth a pretty penny.

* I kept changing my mind about what city it’s based on, and decided to stop trying because it really doesn’t matter.

But before he can even start this investigation, he stumbles across a murder. Now, that’s not why he’s in town, but he sort of befriends the woman dating the dead man (who turns out to be related to the horse’s owner). He’s warned off by the local police, but he ends up looking into the murder, too.

It’s not long at all before Max discovers that almost nothing is what it seems and that he might have bitten off more than he can chew this time.

The Other POV

Interwoven with Max’s story is the first-person account of a young woman becoming a serial killer. On the one hand it’s easy to see why we get this (her weapon of choice is used in the murder)—but it frequently feels like it could be a different book.

Actually, you could excise these chapters (or at least almost all of them) and publish it as a stand-alone novella. You’d probably need a different conclusion to make it satisfactory—but it’d work that w
This isn’t entirely a criticism (although it does feel a little out of place from time to time)—the way this story ends up merging with the rest of the novel really works and adds to the overall impact of the novel.

The only real complaint I have about it is that all these chapters are in italics, and it just bugs me to read that much italicized material, there’s gotta be a better way to set that kind of thing off from the rest of the text.

The Series Arc

After the way that Harvested ended (and well, the way that most of that book went), I assumed we’d get a lot more time and space devoted to the murder of Max’s daughter and the disappearance of his wife in this book. I didn’t expect that he’d solve everything so soon, but still.

And while Max (and/or Lambert) didn’t blow off the topic, the novel didn’t focus on it as much as I’d assumed. I think it’s good for the long-term health of the series, as long as Lambert doesn’t drag things out in this regard. The closing pages of this novel bring in a new twist to the series that can help out with the overall arc(s), too.

So, what did I think about Teaching Moments?

It feels pretty uncharacteristic of me not to mention Max’s dog so far. Russ is one of those rescued at the end of Harvested and he’s become an important part of Max’s life. He’s a very good boy, and a canine I’m pleased to make the acquaintance of.

I don’t think I was as surprised at a lot of the serial killer story as the novel wanted me to be. That may be because I read too many things in this genre. It was well-executed and I don’t have any noteworthy negative things to say about it beyond I thought it wasn’t that unexpected. I don’t need to be shocked, I just want a good story, and that’s what Lambert delivered.

A solid PI novel is one of my favorite things in the world. Lambert’s Max Boucher novels are good examples of the genre. Yes, the setting and the central crime might not be common for the genre, but they work well in Lambert’s hands. I’m definitely looking forward to more of these, and recommend them to you. Even if you’re not looking for a series, Teaching Moments could work as a standalone. Either way, you should give this a shot.


3.5 Stars

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Grandpappy’s Corner: What’s in Your Howl? by Douglas Gamble, Illustrated by: Steve Humke, Terri Isaacson: If Only Ylvis Had Asked This Question Instead…

Grandpappy's Corner What's in Your Howl?

What’s in Your Howl?

by Douglas Gamble, illustrated by: Steve Humke, Terri Isaacson

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Publisher: Xulon Press
Publication Date: January 1, 2023
Format: Paperback  
Length: 36 pg.
Read Date: June 24, 2023
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What’s What’s in Your Howl? About?

Alberto (an armadillo) is fascinated by Carlos (a coyote)–the way he runs and leaps, the way his fur looks, and especially his howl. But he doesn’t understand why Carlos howls–what’s he trying to say or accomplish by it?

So he asks–and Carlos answers, “It depends.” (not in the trickster coyote way, although that would be fun in a different way) He then explains some of the many things his howl can mean, depending on the circumstance. As he does so, Alberto takes it in and compares it to some of the things he does in similar circumstances. These two might be very different kinds of mammals, but they do have a lot in common after all.

Let’s Talk about the Art for a Minute

Oh, this is very nice. The art is fairly realistic, there’s a good southwest flavor to it all. The close-ups of the armadillo and the coyote are really eye-catching, and…well, if I keep going, I’m going to just do a poor job of describing each image.

Rather, than my continuing to fumble around, you can see a few samples on the author’s Facebook page.

How is it to Read Aloud?

It’s a little wordier than most books I’ve talked about as part of this series–that’s not a bad thing, it’s just a description. This isn’t a “fun” read with tongue twisters or rhymes, it’s simply nice, straightforward text that’ll work well for a time to settle down–or for someone who’s already settled and wants to hear “another story.” This isn’t really one to goof around with.

So, what did I think about What’s in Your Howl??

I heard of this book on Episode 137 of Let Me Tell You a Story Podcast, Gamble was talking about the creation of it, how the art was worked on, and so on. It was an interesting discussion and it prompted me to get this book. You might want to give it a listen.

I enjoyed this on several levels–the art, even the typeface, and the message. It’s a good combination of earnestness, cuteness, and scenery. If you’re looking for more in a book for toddlers, you might want to lower your expectations.

A sequel would be very welcome. Or an expanded edition, anyway. I know my 20-something daughter would appreciate it, she uttered an annoyed gasp after the last page, because she was really expecting an answer to Carlos’ question to Alberto.

Give this a shot.


3 Stars

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LITERARY LOCALS: A Q&A About Writing in Idaho with Brock Poulsen

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Brock Poulsen is another writer I recently met at the Boise Library!’s Book Faire, I’m very glad he took a few minutes to chat with me then and now. Hope you enjoy this look at writing in Idaho.


Before we get into things, why don’t you give the reader a brief introduction to you and your work.
Hi reader! I’m a genre writer, with stories that run the gamut from fantasy to sci-fi to horror. My main series is called Bizarre Frontier, and it’s my take on a weird western. There’s plenty of magic and lots of monsters, inspired by the folklore of the American west. Five books are out so far, with more on the way! My other stories have appeared in anthologies and online magazines, and I have a collection of short horror stories that was recently released on November 25th.
This seems like a good time to plug the new book—what’s it called, where can people pick it up, etc?
It’s called Gathering Shells and Other Stories, available at godless.com or at Amazon.

What brought you to Idaho in the first place? What is it about Idaho that keeps you here?
I moved to Idaho about 6 years ago, to bring us a little closer to my wife’s family. We’d always enjoyed our visits before moving here, and we stay because it’s beautiful, and the food and people are wonderful!
I think you might be the first to mention the food in relation to this question. I’m tempted to ask several follow-ups about that, but this isn’t that kind of blog. But you’ve got me wondering where you like to tie the feed-bag on (note how cleverly I adopt a Western figure of speech while talking to a Weird Western writer).
Oh, one of my favorite topics! Thai Basil in Meridian is a favorite. If it were financially and physiologically viable, I would replace all the liquids in my life with their yellow curry. It is a triumph of flavor.

I also love getting banh mi from the Baguette Deli, and have eaten an absurd number of tacos from Fiesta Chicken. I’m sure I could go on, but writers aren’t really known for being overly verbose, right?

🙂 Thai Basil has been on our “we should try that” list for a while. I think their yellow curry is in my near-future. Thanks!

Are you tied into some sort of local author/bookish group/culture? If so, tell us about it and how it helps you as an author.
I’m a proud member of the Idaho Writer’s Guild, and I love attending their events. I’ve met several good friends there, and I love getting together and inspiring each other. They host great events with fantastic guests, and I think they’ve helped me become a better writer.
Not surprisingly, you’re not the first to mention IWG. What kind of events do they hold. What are some of the ways they’ve helped you become that better writer? In short, I guess, why should someone in the area check them out?
Writing can feel very lonely, and the social aspects of the IWG are great for counteracting that at least a little bit. Being around other writers is great for working out wrinkles in your story, talking about the craft and logistics, and generally encouraging each other to stick with it. They’ve also had more structured meetups where successful writers have come to talk about some of the more technical and business aspects of being an indie writer. They have helped me get a better grasp on things like advertising and building an audience.

What kind of events in the area do you attend—either to sell/promote your books or to network with authors? Are there any outside of this area that you hit regularly and wish we had something like it here?
I’ve been attending a Creative Writing group at the Cole and Ustick library, which has been awesome for meeting other motivated writers. I’m trying to do more promotion and selling at local events, including the recent Boise Book Faire and the upcoming Krampus Con.
Did the Library’s Faire live up to your expectations? That is, if you had any. Did you learn (from your experience or talking to others) what to do more of or not to do at your next event? In general, what was your experience like? Have you attended Krampus Con (either as an author or just an attendee)–what’s it like? I’ve often wondered, but haven’t fit it into my schedule.
I really wasn’t sure what to expect at the Book Faire, but I loved hanging out with other indies from around the valley. One of my favorite parts was when I had a pretty in-depth conversation about my book series with a nine-year-old girl. She asked such great questions, and it was an absolute delight. That young lady’s parents should be proud of what a sharp literary mind she’s developed.

The tricky thing about local events–and about selling books in general–is getting my stuff in front of the right audience. The stories I write fit into some specific niches, so it’s about finding the right people, which is a challenge.

What’s the breakdown of your audience—do you have a strong local base, or are your readers from other parts of the world?
I have readers spread out all over the world, mostly in the United States, but I’ve sold books to people in Europe as well. I’d love to connect with more local readers, because those in-person connections are amazing. Talking about stories with passionate readers is a thrilling, life-affirming experience, and I love it.

Do you think there are particular challenges or advantages to being a writer in the Treasure Valley? (possibly both)
Writing has the advantage of being a very mobile activity. I can do it from essentially anywhere, and people can access my work from all over the world. Treasure Valley is a smaller market than some, but I think the people here are no less excited about reading. Our library system is amazing, also, which is so good for writers and readers alike.

Do you bring Idaho (or some sort of Idaho-sensibility, assuming one exists) to your work? Whether or not anyone else sees it, can you look at some aspect of your writing and think “That’s Idaho” or “I would do ____ differently if I was a Kentuckian or from Illinois?”
do think my weird westerns have, probably unavoidably, a spirit of the American west that exists strongly in Idaho. My characters are brave and adventurous, they don’t back down from challenges, and they care deeply about their fellow human beings. Those are qualities that I love to see Idaho live up to.

One final question, is there a book (or two…or 18, if you get really carried away), that embodies Idaho/the Idaho spirit to you to recommend to my readers?
This doesn’t have a direct Idaho connection, but Six-Gun Snow White by Catherynne M. Valente was an excellent western take on the Snow White story. Another recent favorite was A House with Good Bones by T. Kingfisher, a scarier book about the perils of returning home, and the way our past can reach into our present.

Interesting picks…I like the thinking behind them (I’ve been meaning to check out that Valente for a while, thanks for the reminder)

Thanks for your time and participation! Hope you enjoyed it!
It was a pleasure, thanks for reaching out!

Readers, be sure to check out the work of Brock Poulsen. His Horror and Weird Westerns look like they could scratch a particular itch or two.


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Fuzzwiggs: The Switcheroo by Amy Maren Rice: A Silly (and Odorous) MG Adventure Sure to Please

I’ve got a Q&A with the author, Amy Maren Rice, coming up this afternoon, come back and give it a read, will you?


Fuzzwiggs: The SwitcherooFuzzwiggs:
The Switcheroo

by Amy Maren Rice

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Series: Fuzzwigs, #1
Publisher: Covenant Books
Publication Date: July 14, 2022
Format: Paperback
Length: 294 pg.
Read Date: August 31-September 2, 2023
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A Brief Introduction/Disclaimer

When I type (and when I read), I always insert an “i” between the “z”s and the “w”. I don’t know why, it just got into the back of my head that way. I believe I caught them all in proofreading, but I may not have.

Apologies in advance. Also, next time she comes up with a race of extra-dimensional characters, I hope Rice consults with me about the vowels she should use.


…the bowl shifted.

Slowly the crimson crockery began to rise. Twig like fingers curled around the edge. A pair of furry arms followed and then came two frightened golden eyes that blinked rapidly at them. A triangular face with a soft puppylike nose was next. It twitched as a strand of pasta slid off it to the floor. Oversized tufted ears slowly unfolded as the creature spoke…

“Please, we are needing your help.” It repeated, its eyes large and pleading like a puppy begging for a treat.

Jasper rubbed his own eyes in disbelief. “W-w-w…” he stuttered. He licked his lips he tried again. “What are you?”

“We are being the Fuzzwiggs,” the creature replied.

“Whose [sic] ‘we’ and what are, uh, those?” Milo asked, brushing the lettuce from his hair.

The animal made a gesture with his long fingers and several other big-eyed furry creatures shuffled forward, filling the room. They came from behind doors and under furniture. One was even inside a kitchen cabinet. Their rabbit like feet stepped carefully around the food-splattered floor…

What’s Fuzzwiggs: The Switcheroo About?

I’ll try to keep this brief…but no promises.

When we meet them, Jasper (12) and his brother, Milo (10), are moving to a new home. Their father died in a plane crash, and their mother can’t support the family as things are. So they, their mother (Emily) and baby brother (Wyatt) are going to live in tiny little town in Idaho to live with their grandfather and aunt. The brothers really don’t know their family well, but the house their father grew up in is large enough for them and the change will be good for the family (or so Emily hopes).

When they arrive, no one is home. They didn’t expect their grandfather to be there—he travels a lot and doesn’t do a great job of keeping the family updated on his location. But their Aunt Delilah should’ve been there. In her place is a note welcoming them to the house, telling them to choose their own rooms, make themselves comfortable, and to do a few specific things—follow some rules and do some chores. Some of the chores and rules are odd, but whatever.

The house is large and wonderful—the boys really want to go exploring some of the strangeness, but their mother makes them focus on unpacking and whatnot. Perhaps the strangest thing about the house is that there is a large, old tree in the center of it—words like “mega” and “ancient” are used by the boys to describe it. Their dad used to joke about being raised in a tree house. Now they get it. Sort of.

What the family is going to learn, is that the Great Tree is a vitally important object beyond their comprehension. It’s guarded (in part) by some strange and magical creatures called the Fuzzwigs. The odd thing about these creatures (well, one of the odd things) is that their magic comes from their flatulence.

But before they learn that, as is expected in stories where people are given oddly specific instructions and warnings—Emily and the kids don’t really heed them as they should. The consequences of that are going to bring a lot of trouble—and the Fuzzwigs—into their lives.

Fuzzwiggs

This is going to be the crux of the book for (at least) most readers—what do you think of these creatures? Even the Middle-Grade readers of this book are going to be familiar with a lot of the things in the novel—the bickering brothers, the family tragedy that makes them move, the mysterious extended family members they have to rely on, the strange thing in the new house that comes with a lot of rules, etc. And sure, silly intelligent (or at least sentient and capable of communication) creatures will be familiar, too—but the Fuzzwiggs are what’s going to draw the attention and keep it or lose it.

For this reader, they kept it. It helps once you get to the point you can see beyond the obvious comedy and get to something deeper (not much deeper, it’s not that kind of book)—I don’t know how much the target audience will respond to that, probably more than I reflexively give them credit for. Also, this will be easier to talk about when we get to Book 2 in the series and I can talk about some of these deeper ideas without spoiling things.

I think the easiest comparison I can make to help one of my readers to understand the Fuzzwiggs is the lemurs from Madagascar movies and the spin-off movies/show. They have a similar kind of manic energy and attitudes. As I make that comparison, I realize that the humor that comes from them reminds me of DreamWorks Animation movies in general.

We might as well segue to:

The Humor

Yes, it’s largely juvenile. So what? The book is directed at people who are juveniles. Can adults appreciate it? Yes, but only if they are willing to find humor in bodily functions and whatnot.

I think of it similarly to that line of C.S. Lewis’ about Fairy Tales, about one day being old enough to start reading them again. Or, “When I became a man I put away childish things, including the fear of childishness and the desire to be very grown up.” Human bodies are silly things that can make gross noises—at a certain age, we pretend it’s not amusing, and at a more advanced age we can chuckle at it again. Sure, I might not find the sounds and this book as amusing as a ten-year-old will…but I’m okay with that. Actually, I’m a little jealous.

So, to get back to the DreamWorks Animation idea—if Shrek and its counterparts are too juvenile for you—skip this book. And give it to someone who will enjoy the humor.

There is one character in particular I’d love to talk about on the comedy front, but it would spoil too much. Let’s just say that there’s a Hollywood hopeful in these pages that deserves a spin-off novella.

So, what did I think about Fuzzwiggs: The Switcheroo?

I really enjoyed the way that the whole family got involved—at least in some way—with the story. It’d have been very easy for Rice to focus on Jasper and Milo—or the boys and their aunt. But Rice got their baby brother rather involved in the story to great effect—Wyatt’s antics elicit some good chuckles and also brought some sweetness into things. I also appreciated the way their Mom was handled—we get a little from Emily’s perspective, we understand how everything we see here is difficult for her and yet she knows it’s best, and so on. And then she’s largely sidelined because this is a MG book and it’s a rule. Or, to put it less cynically, otherwise, the boys couldn’t get into adventures. But it’s a comical sidelining that Rice used well.

The adventure story itself is exactly what you want in this kind of story—there’s a great trek through the wilderness, hazards from within and without, some villains that really don’t realize what they’ve gotten themselves into (they’re both rotten and comical, a great combination for this kind of book), and some great battles (or scenes that are battle-ish and I don’t know how else to characterize them) and some nice story resolutions with hidden life lessons in them. It’s a good balance between comedy and adventure that I’d imagine would appeal to a broad range of middle-grade readers.

I had a few quibbles with the book and feel like I should mention them. There’s a museum in town that was established before Lewis and Clark stumbled through the area. I assume that was an editorial slip, or there’s going to be a great explanation eventually given for that. I do wonder if some of the descriptions of the magic/abilities of some of the creatures could’ve been explained a little better. Some (all?) of the scenes that cut away to things not directly involving the main events of this book were really hard to follow, yes, they’re establishing the world for this series and setting up future books. But I think a little more finesse would’ve helped a lot here. Neither of these are fatal flaws, and I anticipate that Rice will do this kind of thing better as she writes more. But they dampen my enthusiasm a bit.

Just a bit, though. I had a ball with this book and I think my readers would enjoy it—and the kids in their lives would enjoy it even more. I’m eager to see where Rice takes this series and I really want to see the scenes that follow the Epilogue. I imagine most readers will be with me there.

Pick this up—I think you’ll be happy you did.


3.5 Stars

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