HC Chats with Jodie from Witty and Sarcastic Bookclub about Self-Published Authors Appreciation Week

I’m dipping my toe into something new here. There’s some things I’ve wanted to try and the written word just ain’t gonna cut it. (and I hate saying that about the written word–maybe it’s just my capabilities with it that are the problem…that seems more likely).

Jodie was willing to be my first victim, er, chat partner. This comes across a little more interview-y than I’d hoped. I’ll get there, maybe. Still we chat about Jodie’s blog, the origins of Self-Published Authors Appreciation Week, what some of this year’s features are going to be like, some self-published work in general, and a little more. Hope you enjoy!

As an added bonus, you can watch me adjust settings while recording–because who doesn’t do that? And try to awkwardly find a comfortable way to sit while staying in frame. Clearly, I’m not a professional. I’m barely an amateur.

I’ve got one more trial balloon scheduled that you should see in a few days. We’ll see if I schedule more.*

* Obviously, part of that is going to depend on finding people to sit down with me. If you’re interested, let me know.

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Divine Providence by Stephen Charnock, edited by Carolyn Whiting: A Classic Reworked

Cover of Divine ProvidenceDivine Providence

by Stephen Charnock, edited by Carolyn Whiting

DETAILS:
Publisher: P&R Publishing
Publication Date: September 1, 2022
Format: Hardcover
Length: 268 pg.
Read Date: June 16-30, 2024
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What’s Divine Providence About?

Question and Answer 11 of the Westminster Shorter Catechism are:

Q. What are God’s works of providence?
A. God’s works of providence are his most holy, wise and powerful preserving and governing all his creatures, and all their actions.

In this classic work (updated for modern readers), Charnock does his best to explain that idea. It’s something that verges on the inexplicable—but something clearly taught in Scripture—and so Charnock seeks to help his readers (originally, hearers) understand it. He doesn’t really engage in debate about it, or defend it against attacks—he does tackle some objections or hard parts to grapple with. But he’s not doing that in a polemic way, mostly he seems to work from the assumption that if he clarifies the doctrine and clears up misconceptions, that’ll be enough. (also, he’s not really trying to engage with naysayers)

That’s basically the first 13 chapters—133 pages or so, almost half the book. The second half is applying that to the Church and individual believers. I remember a former pastor of mine saying that this (and related) doctrines in Scripture weren’t used in the way most contemporary people use them—to beat up on believers who don’t quite agree with us on providence, predestination, election, and whatnot. Instead, the inspired writers used them to comfort, encourage, and give confidence to believers. And that’s just what Charnock does in the second half.

He starts by describing how Providence is an expression of care and protection for the Church and how we see that. Then he focuses on individual Christians, and how we can find comfort and encouragement in all things from these teachings. Even the last chapter here, “The Duty Providence Requires,” is made up of items like “believe in God’s work,” “remember what He as done,” “wait patiently for Him.” and so on—things that really call for the confidence I mentioned earlier to be expressed.

Bonus materials

Before the introductions, prefaces, etc. the reader is presented with a nine-page outline of the work—which is a great bonus and will be very helpful for students and other readers really wanting to dive into the nitty-gritty of this work.

The editor has also broken this down into clearer chapters (see below) and added summary paragraphs to each chapter to help the reader (I’m not sure how helpful those ultimately were and stopped reading them pretty quickly).

There are also study/discussion questions provided at the end of every chapter. They don’t seem too bad—but again, I didn’t spend much time looking at those. But I think they’ll be a strong selling point for many.

The Modernizing of it All

In the Editor’s Preface, Carolyn Whiting states that

I sought to retain the author’s meaning while updating the language and style, sentence by sentence, to make it more accessible for today’s reader. The original volume, which was a compilation of a series of Charnock’s sermons, had no chapters or subheads and few paragraphs. In addition to adding these features, I have inserted the occasional transition, updated spelling and pronouns for a contemporary audience, replaced archaic vocabulary with modern equivalents, and updated Scripture to the English Standard Version except where noted.

Now, I get updating pronoun use, changing to ESV, and most of the other changes (although typically “language” means changing archaic words that have changed meanings, shortening sentences, etc.). The chapters and subheads idea is great—the original edition is tough to read just because of the organization. I have no issues with what Whiting stated there.

But then I started seeing (and I don’t know how often, but it happens a few times) footnotes saying “Charnock goes on to say…” and giving us a phrase or two beyond that. Why those phrases couldn’t be added above I didn’t once understand. But it tripped me up—just how much was Whiting doing to make Charnock accessible to the modern reader? I spent too much of my mental RAM wondering about that while reading and likely didn’t get as much out of it as I should’ve.

To give you a flavor here are the first few paragraphs of the book (and no, I don’t know why the line spacing is that way…I assure you, I’ve tried to stop it).

This Edition
In the beginning of 2 Chronicles 16, we find Baasha, king of Israel, building and fortifying Ramah. Situated on the road between Jerusalem and Samaria, Ramah is about twelve miles from Jerusalem, the metropolis of Judah and the seat of its king, Asa. Baasha intends to isolate Asa and to prohibit anyone from crossing the border between the two nations (v. 1).

Baasha is probably afraid that the people of Israel will revolt and flee to Judah because Asa has reformed the practice of religion there. Therefore, Baasha fortifies Ramah to hinder and intercept any who try to pass by on that account. “For great numbers had deserted to [Asa] from Israe| when they saw that the Lorp his God was with him” (2 Chron. 15:9).

When Asa realizes what Baasha is doing, he is afraid, and in his fear he sins by seeking help through worldly means rather than by turning to God. He enters into a covenant with Ben-hadad, king of Syria, who is a neighbor and an idolatrous prince, and purchases his assistance for the sacrilegious price of silver and gold from the temple treasury. His plan is for Ben-hadad to invade Israel’s territories and distract Baasha from fortifying Ramah. The large payment easily persuades Ben-hadad to break his covenant with Baasha, and his armies successfully take several cities, including all the store cities of Naphtali (2 Chron. 16:2-4). Baasha is forced to abandon Ramah in order to save his country, and Asa seizes the materials Baasha has left behind and uses them to build two cities, Geba and Mizpah (vv. 5-6).

Original Text
In the beginning of the chapter you find Baasha king of Israel raising walls about, and fortifying Ramah, a place about twelve miles from Jerusalem, the metropolis of Judah, intending by that means to block Asa up, because Ramah lay just upon the road between Jerusalem and Samaria, the seats of the two kings, ver. 1.

Baasha was probably afraid of the revolt of Israel to Judah, upon that reformation of religion wrought by Asa, and therefore would fortify that place, to be a hindrance, and to intercept any that should pass upon that account; and to this purpose makes great preparation, as appears ver. 6, for with the provision Baasha had made for the fortification of Ramah, Asa, after the seizing of the materials, builds two towns, Geba and Mispah.

Asa seeing Baasha so busy about this design, and fearing the consequence of it, hath recourse to carnal policy rather than to God; and therefore enters into league with Benhadad, a neighbour, though an idolatrous prince, and purchaseth his assistance with the sacrilegious price of the treasure of the temple, ver. 2, 3; and hereby engageth him to invade the king of Israel’s territories, that he might thereby find work for Baasha in another part, and so divert him from that design upon which he was so bent: ver. 3, ‘Go, break thy league with Baasha, that he may depart from me.’

Benhadad is easily persuaded by the quantity of gold, &c., to break his league, and make an inroad, and proves victorious, and takes many cities where the magazines and stores were laid up, ver. 4.

Baasha now, to save his country, and make head against his enemies, is forced to leave Ramah; whereupon Asa, who watched his opportunity, seizeth the materials he had left for the fortifying of Ramah, and puts them to another use, ver. 5, 6.

I can’t say the Whiting version is bad…but I don’t know that Charnock needed that much help. My son said it reminded him of copying something (encylopedia entry, article, etc.) for a report in school, but changing just enough of it so as not to be accused of plagiarism.

I do wonder if the wrong name is on the cover/title page, however.

So, what did I think about Divine Providence?

When I could stop focusing on the issues in the above section, I really appreciated the book. The first half was clearly the same kind of thinking seen in The Existence and Attributes of God.

Parts 2 and 3, the application of the doctrine to our lives and the Church? I absolutely loved that and was so encouraged it. There was so much there that was so good to see and be reminded of. It’s truly worth reading the book to get those parts (but you do need to read the first part—you can’t just jump into these sections, you need the foundation).

I can’t be as happy with this as I’d like—I just can’t get over the paraphrasing (for lack of a better term) bothers me more than it maybe should. I do think this is a lot easier to read than the non-modernized version (if only because mostly those are printed with tiny typefaces), and will reach more people. But the purist in me worries we lose too much of Charnock.

The important thing, however, is that Charnock is being brought to readers in a digestible manner. I do encourage people to pick it up because of that.


3 Stars

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Saturday Miscellany—7/6/24

As is typical of a holiday week, this is a short post. Less to distract you from your Saturday reading, right?

Odds ‘n ends about books and reading that caught my eye this week. You’ve probably seen some/most/all of them, but just in case:
bullet This is Why Book Marketing Doesn’t Work
bullet ‘Really I just want to stay home and make art about my dog’: An interview with Sara Varon—I’m pretty sure I’ve never run across Varon before, but this interview makes me interested in checking out her stuff.
bullet 7 Thrillers With Shocking Twists
bullet 10 Must-Read Authors for Fans of First-Person Adult Urban Fantasy—This is a very narrow category…but can’t argue with most of this picks.
bullet Tough Questions with Left on the Shelf—the latest in the Tough Questions series

To help talk about backlist titles (and just for fun), What Was I Talking About 10 Years Ago Week? (not much, really)
bullet Don’t Hurt People and Don’t Take Their Stuff: A Libertarian Manifesto by Matt Kibbe
bullet I noted the release of Premonitions by Jamie Schultz and Artful by Peter David

This Week’s New Releases that I’m Excited About and/or You’ll Probably See Here Soon:
bullet Broiler by Eli Cranor—I dunno…it’s by Cranor, isn’t that enough? It’s about revenge, power, economic disparity in the most American of places—a chicken processing plant.
bullet Dog Day Afternoon by David Rosenfelt—Marcus asks Andy for a favor and gets him to represent a suspected mass-shooter. I really enjoyed this one, as I said recently.
bullet Breaking the Dark: A Jessica Jones Marvel Crime Novel by Lisa Jewell—Jessica Jones travels to England to investigate some teens who are too-perfect. It’s hard to explain in a phrase or two…but these are creepy kids and something has to be making them that way.
bullet Boise Longpig Hunting Club by Nick Kolakowski—the new edition of this explosive thriller
bullet The Night Ends with Fire by K. X. Song—a new retelling of the story of Mulan.
bullet Junkyard Roadhouse by Faith Hunter—Shining Smith is neck-deep in trouble—that’s nothing new, sure, but it’s a different kind of trouble.

For books are not absolutely dead things, but do contain a potency of life in them to be as active as that soul was whose progeny they are; nay, they do preserve as in a vial the purest efficacy and extraction of that living intellect that bred them. - John Milton

Shades of Mercy by Bruce Borgos: Memory Brushes the Same Years

Reading back-to-back books featuring a character named Mercy—not to mention writing about one while reading another—is a fun way to trip yourself up. Thankfully the genres are different. But if I start rambling on about the fae or coyotes, you’ll know why. Also, skip to the next sentence or so.


Cover of Shades of Mercy by Bruce BorgosShades of Mercy

by Bruce Borgos

DETAILS:
Series: Porter Beck, #2
Publisher: Minotaur Books
Publication Date: July 16, 2024
Format: e-ARC
Length: 352 pg.
Read Date: June 27-July 1, 2024
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What’s Shades of Mercy About?

Sheriff Porter Beck’s life intersects with a couple of high school buddies for the first time in many years. And both situations should make anyone else from high school leery of running into him.

We open with Beck coming across one of those friends after they’d overdosed. Soon after, a federal investigator recruits Beck to go visit the other one. Jesse Roy has recently moved back to the area, and is renovating his father’s ranch into something that Beck can’t comprehend—it’s just too large, too gaudy, for this area. Cattle ranching is going really well for Jesse (too well?). The night before, something had gone wrong with a test vehicle with the Air Force, and something had fallen on Roy’s prize bull, destroying it. The investigator is here to negotiate a settlement—and it’s not a little one.

But something about the whole deal sets Beck’s B.S.-meter off. He forces the investigator to come clean—someone had hacked an Air Force drone and launched a missile at the cow. It was a targeted hit—but why?

Beck knows if he doesn’t help for the search for this hacker (and they know they’re local, somehow) and get to the root of the problems soon, his county will be overrun by Intelligence officers from all sorts of government agencies.

Oh, and there are wildfires threatening the county on several sides, and a large group assembling to storm Area 51. Just in case it didn’t seem like he had enough going on.

The investigation quickly points at a teenage girl who is serving some time at a teen facility nearby. As hard as it might be to believe. And before he knows it—Beck finds himself dealing with so much more than a hacker.

Comparing Shades of Mercy to The Bitter Past

So, the first book used dual timelines to tell the story—and I was afraid Borgos would try to pull that trick again. I think it could’ve worked, but eventually, his county is going to run out of people who were doing interesting things several decades ago. This time it’s all one timeline (with a little backtracking every now and then, but not much. But we do bounce between a few perspectives, so we still get the advantage of multiple POVs. So he’s able to maintain some of the same feel there.

His deputies are back, but some of them aren’t really seen due to the fires. There’ve been some changes since the last book and it’s good to see that everything isn’t stagnant with this series. We don’t get as much time with them all this time, and that’s a disappointment. Other characters return, too, most of them made me happy and one was a pleasant surprise. I had a more specific sentence there, but decided to remove the names…

The big change is the focus—The Bitter Past is all about the past—what it does in the present, how it can change so much about your life when you learn new things about your own past. Also, the weapons and conflicts of the past.

This one is very present and future-focused. It’s also good to see that Borgos isn’t stuck in one frame of mind.

So, what did I think about Shades of Mercy?

I’m having a hard time talking about this book without saying too much about the content.

In what—I think—was a very nice bit of story-telling is that there were a few things that should make the attentive reader pause and wonder if Borgos is being sloppy. I’m going to try to be vague here, but I’m thinking of some parts of the timelines before the novel started—and some things that happened during the novel that we don’t see first-hand, but see the effects of. I was too invested in the stories to spend time on these myself—I basically shrugged and moved on (not that I noticed everything I should’ve, either). I’m going to give you credit for being perceptive and thoughtful enough to catch these things—then I’m going to reassure you: trust Borgos. Everything gets tied up, everything makes sense, I can’t tell you how often in the last pages I said “Oh, sure—that makes sense,” (I also said “I probably should’ve caught that” about most of those items). It’s really a nice and tidy book.

I’m worried that my last paragraph makes the whole thing seem like a mess. Au contraire. This is a tight thriller—it’s only on a few points that it I was mistaken that he’d left things dangling. The rest of the book is as tightly written as you could hope (which I should’ve realized described the rest, too). There’s a little slowness for a chapter or two, just to bring us back into this world, reintroduce the character, and catch us up on Beck’s life—then we’re off to the races from the moment that Beck is brought to his old friend’s ranch.

The conclusion was just great—exactly what this book (and character) needed.

This book bodes well for the rest of the series that follows—yes, I’d like a “smaller” crime. One that didn’t involve multiple state and federal agencies, for one. Just a matter of Beck and his guys analyzing a crime scene and then figuring out who in their small community could’ve done it. It’d just be more believable than all the federal and military types wanding around all the time. But the way Borgos is dealing with the latter, I’m not sure I care.

There’s enough humor and heart here to take the edge off of things—the tension gets cut, the characters are made more endearing, and the reader can catch their breath before diving into more tension and action.

I wasn’t as wow-ed with this book as I was the first—but I was still impressed, and this book makes me more sure what the following books will be like than I was with The Bitter Past. And it promises to be a very good series. I’m repeating myself, so it’s time to wrap this up. Either with Shades of Mercy or The Bitter Past, you want to get on board this series here at the beginning.

Disclaimer: I received a copy of this book from St. Martin’s Press via NetGalley—thanks to both for this.


4 Stars

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June 2024 in Retrospect: What I Read/Listened to/Wrote About

I finished 24 titles (4 up from last month, 6 down from last June), with an equivalent of 7,342 pages or the equivalent (1,128 up from last month), and gave them an average of 3.52 stars (.05 up from last month, so basically it’s a draw).

On the writing front, my new work schedule is really taking its toll, but I think I’m starting to be able to plan around it and prepare for those days that I know are going to be hurting me. We’ll see if I say something in August or not. As is my custom, I really do think I could’ve written more–especially on the review-ish front, but I’m happy enough.

Overall, I’m calling June a win (especially if you look at the Mt. TBR size!). Here’s the breakdown.
Books/Novels/Novellas Read/Listened to

Cover for Poetry Comics by Grant Snider Cover image of Rites of Passage by MD Presley First Frost
3 Stars 3.5 Stars 3.5 Stars
The Ink Black Heart Cover of Cultural Sanctification by Stephen O. Presley Bad Actors
3.5 Stars 4 Stars 3.5 Stars
I'm Afraid You've Got Dragons Cover image to E Rathke's Howl Cover image for the audiobook of Paper and Blood by Kevin Hearne
3.5 Stars 3 Stars 4 Stars
Cover image of The Mercy Chair by MW Craven Cover of Dinosaurs in Trucks Because Hey Why Not? by Sandra Boynton Cover of The Hijacked Conscience
5 Stars 2 1/2 Stars 3 Stars
Cover for the audiobook of The Bitter Past by Bruce Borgos Cover of The Running Grave by Robert Galbraith Cover of the audiobook for Erasure by Percival Everett
4 1/2 Stars 5 Stars 4 Stars
Cover image for The Teachings of Shirelle by Douglas Green Cover for Dog Day Afternoon by David Rosenfelt Cover for The Kaiju Preservation Society by John Scalzi
3 Stars 4 Stars 5 Stars
Cover for Detours and Do-Overs by Wesley Parker Cover for Grammar Sex by Robert Germaux Cover for Labyrinth by Kat Richardson
4 Stars 3 Stars 3 Stars
The Book of Perilous Dishes Cover of Under the Barnyard Light by Carla Crane Osborne Cover to Divine Providence by Stephen Charnock
2 1/2 Stars 3 Stars 3 Stars

Still Reading

Glorifying and Enjoying God Word and Spirit Redemptive History & Biblical Interpretation
Institutes of Elenctic Theology Vol. 2 Cover for Shades of Mercy by Bruce Borgos Cover for A Door in the Dark by Scott Reintgen

Ratings

5 Stars 2 2 1/2 Stars 2
4 1/2 Stars 1 2 Stars 0
4 Stars 5 1 1/2 Stars 0
3.5 Stars 6 1 Star 0
3 Stars 8
Average = 3.52

TBR Stacks/Piles/Heaps

Audio E-book Physical Goodreads
Want-to-Read
NetGalley
Shelf/ARCs/Review Copies
End of
2023
6 47 68 153 5
1st of the
Month
3 52 83 163 8
Added 2 5 6 0 1
Read/
Listened
2 3 10 1 2
Current Total 3 54 79 162 7

Breakdowns:
“Traditionally” Published: 16
Self-/Independent Published: 8

Genre This Month Year to Date
Children’s 1 (4%) 5 (4%)
Fantasy 3 (13%) 16 (12%)
General Fiction/ Literature 2 (8%) 11 (8%)
Mystery/ Suspense/ Thriller 7 (29%) 43 (33%)
Non-Fiction 2 (8%) 13 (10%)
Science Fiction 1 (4%) 9 (7%)
Theology/ Christian Living 3 (13%) 17 (13%)
Urban Fantasy 3 (13%) 15 (11%)
“Other” (Horror/ Humor/ Steampunk/ Western) 1 (4%) 2 (2%)

Review-ish Things Posted

Other Things I Wrote
Other than the Saturday Miscellanies (1st, 8th, 15th, 22ndh, and 29th), I also wrote:

Enough about me—how Was Your June?


June BookMemory Calendar

WWW Wednesday, July 3, 2024

This meme was formerly hosted by MizB at A Daily Rhythm and revived on Taking on a World of Words—and shown to me by Aurore-Anne-Chehoke at Diary-of-a-black-city-girl.

The Three Ws are:
What are you currently reading?
What did you recently finish reading?
What do you think you’ll read next?

Seems easy enough, right? Let’s take a peek at this week’s answers:

What are you currently reading?

I’m reading Winter Lost by Patricia Briggs, and am listening to A Door in the Dark by Scott Reintgen, read by Jesse Vilinsky on audiobook–it’s a very strange semi-zombie Fantasy novel. Thankfully, there’s only one zombie-ish thing wandering around. (still, I shook a virtual fist at the friend who recommended it to me).

Cover of Winter LostBlank SpaceCover for A Door in the Dark by Scott Reintgen

What did you recently finish reading?

I just finished Bruce Borgos’s Shades of Mercy–and Borgos was not messing around with this sequel. The last audiobook I finished was Labyrinth by Kat Richardson, read by Mia Barron.

Cover for Shades of Mercy by Bruce BorgosBlank SpaceCover for Labyrinth by Kat Richardson

What do you think you’ll read next?

My next book should be for The Last King of California by Jordan Harper and my next audiobook should be Breaking the Dark by Lisa Jewell, read by Helen Laser. I’ve been wanting to read this Harper book for ages, meanwhile, I didn’t know anything about the audiobook until yesterday. But I’m curious about what Marvel’s trying on the novel front, might as well start here, right?

Cover of The Last King of California by Jordan HarperBlank SpaceCover of Breaking the Dark by Lisa Jewell

You got anything explosive on your hands for tomorrow?*

* Yeah, I should do better. Sorry.

Some Questions About Cover Art With…Savanna Mayer and Shannon Knight

Last year, Shannon Knight and her cover artist stopped by for a Q&A about the cover to Wish Givers and how it was designed. Now she’s back with Savanna Mayer to talk about the cover of her upcoming Domestication and Savanna’s work on the cover. I participated (belatedly) in the Cover Reveal for it last week, but please allow me to remind you all about the creepy image in question.

Cover for Domestication by Shannon Knight

I typically call these posts “A Few Quick Questions”—but we leave “Few” and “Quick” in the rearview mirror. So I’m going with “Some” (because that’s as creative as I am today). Why don’t we get to them now?


Savanna: Why don’t you give my readers a quick introduction to you and your work–including whatever titles, websites, links, etc. you’re in the mood to share. Also, because I’m a philistine incapable of it–how would you describe your style?
Savanna Mayer is a hermit-like illustrator, collector of rusty old keys, and ever-aspiring necromancer.  Residing in the mythical dairyland of Wisconsin, when Savanna is not busy wrangling barn cats, they’re almost certainly drawing lady knights or practicing their Breath of the Wild chefery. With a variety of works ranging from independent comics to sword-themed tattoos, for a wide range of clientele including Critical Role, Baffling magazine, and Dual Wield Studios, Savanna is inspired by all things fantasy. They strive to create new worlds and to explore the power and perspective misfits can bring to them.

I can be found posting the majority of my finished and in-progress work on Tumblr: Nightmaskart.tumblr.com or on Twitter: @well_dipper

My official website is under construction by my lovely girlfriend who handles the confusing computer side of things when I get too overwhelmed.

How to describe my style… let’s see I’d say representational/ old comic book style. I take so much inspiration from Chris Riddel, Tony DiTerlizzi, and Jeremy Bastian. I grew up pursuing a very traditional pen and ink style very akin to the golden age of comics like Jeffrey Catherine Jones and her contemporaries. That traditional base of my work carries over into the way I now work digitally. I do often get asked if my digital works are traditional when in fact I just prefer to use a brush that most closely resembles a pencil to get that nice gritty but at the same time clean line texture.

How did you get into doing cover art? I don’t imagine you just hang your shingle out there (virtual or otherwise) and start getting clients.
I started out doing serious freelance by posting fan art of different TTRPG shows I had been watching and that got attention. I started getting paid to do patreon comics for one TTRPG company and then as my work got more polished indie creators in the TTRPG community reached out wanting to commission me for interior illustration. Finally, I got a gig doing cover work and that just kept going. The TTRPG community has been so nurturing to me as an artist, there’s always work to be found.

Shannon, I had Savanna describe their style earlier, now it’s your turn–how would you describe it? Did you seek them out for Domestication or find them as you were looking for someone and think, “That’s it!”?
I’d describe Savanna’s style as comic with rough lines. I’d decided that a rough comic style would work well for Domestication based on pieces by an artist called WolfSkullJack. (For contrast, I think of Jen Bartel as a comic artist with really clean lines.)

I learned about Savanna in 2023 when I saw an illustration of theirs of Gideon the Ninth, which, of course, was jam-packed with bones. I knew my illustration would need bones, so I took a closer look at their portfolio, which, I admit, was a little difficult to find. In this case, Savanna’s lack of a formal website and portfolio did increase the odds that their commercial work would be less expensive, which was an important element for me, especially since I was passing up the cheaper and more traditional option of altered photography so common in the horror and thriller genres.

Savanna: Any advice for those looking for an artist that Shannon didn’t mention? Obviously, the short answer is hiring you. But let’s pretend you can’t take on a client, what should someone do?
Forgive me for being goth for a hot second, but to quote Hannibal Lecter from Silence of the Lambs, “We covet what we see every day.” I think as artists we’re always voracious to grow our craft and get better and therefore surround ourselves with art that we love and use as inspiration in our own craft. To find artists that create the same work as I do, I would say just look through my twitter feed and see whose work I’m reposting or commenting under, see who I’m following and you’ll find my inspirations or people who match my style pretty closely.

I think it’s perfectly okay to message an artist and give a brief synopsis of your project and be upfront with what kind of budget you’re working with. If it’s not in their scope it’s not rude to ask if they have an artist friend they could recommend for the job with a similar style who’s willing to work for the budget. Most of us in the community are friends and we love to help give each other work.

Yeah, wouldn’t want to sound goth-y with this cover. 🙂 A Silence of the Lambs quotation is welcome here anytime.

Shannon, let’s focus on Domestication, how (as much as you remember off the top of your head) did you describe what you were looking for to Savanna?
H.C., I pour out words. I am a person of words. With my previous cover artists, I’d had a very specific image in mind, but I didn’t have one for this book. There was one scene I could use, but what I really wanted was an abstract image, so I referenced a few different pictures, I summarized the plot and highlighted some themes, and I even threw in a Spotify playlist of mostly American folk and bluegrass that I’d created for the story while writing.

Elizabeth Peiró, who painted my Wish Givers cover and whom you talked with previously, H.C., really gave me confidence that more is better when an author is first sharing her ideas with a cover artist, which is why I even included the playlist.

I love the idea of a playlist as part of the package. Savanna–did that help? (or at least expose you to new artists?) Incidentally, I’ve been using that playlist a lot since you sent it to me, Shannon.
Savanna: Yes, it was very helpful. I love when clients have mood boards or playlists, it makes it easier to get a sense of what they’re looking for.
Shannon: Oh, hurray!

What was it about this project that appealed to you? (or are you at the stage in your career that “a project that pays” is your criteria?)
Savanna: I may always be at the ‘a project that pays’ criteria stage haha, [I hear that] but Shannon said I’d get to draw bones and I said ‘say less’. I love drawing bones so that was a big selling point. I love horror and I live on a farm already, I know how creepy the intricacy of farm life can get and thought it was a great synopsis for a book so I’m thrilled to work with Shannon. Living on a farm not many people realize how closely you work with the earth and you brush shoulders with life and death every day.
Shannon: Savanna, your work is ideal for horror, and I could definitely see your career expanding in that direction. There’s a simplicity to a comic-style illustration, I think, that allows for frightening and creepy images that would perhaps be considered too much in a more realistic-to-life art style.

To further make my point, H.C., take a look at one of the alternative designs that Savanna had proposed. It’s very visually arresting! An additional note explained that farm animals, people, and bones are tumbling down from the fingers. Very unsettling and powerful! For additional clarification, my story is entirely realistic in its execution, so these visuals are abstract rather than concrete representations from the book.
Domestication alternate design proposal

For you both: When pitching ideas, do you literally show existing covers by others and say “like this one, but without X” or “something that feels like/has the same vibe as this”? Or do you leave other peoples’ work out of the conversation?
Shannon: This time, I did reference an existing cover. I said I’d prefer something abstract, perhaps with no humans in it at all, and I shared the cover of Kingfisher’s What Moves the Dead with art by Christina Mrozik as an example of an ideal design.

More importantly, though, I tend to share an artist’s own work back with them as examples of what appeals to me. For instance, I mentioned Savanna’s knight and mermaid illustration because of the circular shape of the design. You can see it in one of their proposed designs.
Domestication alternate design proposal
I’m definitely seeing the line between that Mrozik cover and this one.
Savanna: I think when touching base with a client to make sure I’m understanding what they want I try to come up with as many sketches as I can and leave others’ work out of the process as the client will usually have other projects in mind from different media. For this book illustration in the back of my mind, I was thinking of the cover for Lapvona and there’s this sculpture, I can’t remember the name of, but it’s a jackrabbit tied up by its back legs and dangling and I knew I wanted to draw on that inspiration. I don’t want to influence what the client has in mind, because they have a better vision of what they want and I don’t want to skew that vision with other input. I think I only bring up my own ideas from other media if a client and I are really struggling to touch base, but that’s pretty rare.

What was the process involved in designing this cover? Savanna—did you read all/part/none of the book before diving in?
Savanna: Shannon had a strong sense of what she wanted when she approached me. I remember writing down a list of what kind of vibes she was looking for/ what kind of elements/ priorities that must be in the design etc… I wasn’t given access to the full story, but given a blurb which definitely got the vibe across and I got a good understanding of what she wanted. Shannon provided tons of reference photography as well as her own sketches for cover ideas. From there I came up with several sketches, some exact interpretations of Shannon’s original sketches, other ideas that I had come up with based on the list I had made. We settled on a sketch and I did some color passes to determine a palette. After that, I got started on linework and once that was completed I started base colors. I kept Shannon updated throughout the entire process so changes could be made easily if needed. We ended up changing the color palette slightly from red bones back to an off-white color, just to make readability better. After colors, I was all done and handed the files over to Shannon to apply text where it was needed.
Shannon: I would very happily share a book with a cover artist! I learned early on, though, as I queried various artists for my first covers, that asking to read the book was an excessive request of their time, so, with Savanna, it didn’t even occur to me that they might be willing to read it while or before creating the cover art.

(Eli Peiró kindly accepted and read the portions of the book I sent to her for Wish Givers. She was illustrating a scene directly from the book, and she was the soul of courtesy about the extra reading homework. We also discussed any visual deviations from the book.)

Savanna, are there genres that you won’t do/don’t think you can do at this stage of your career? Or are you at an “I’ll do anything” stage? Are there genres that you haven’t done a cover for that you’d like to try?
Hmm, I’m really up for anything, but I know I’m not the best at say the cyberpunk genre, too many sharp lines and mechanical things that won’t look right if they’re slightly off. I love drawing organic shapes too much so I fear cyberpunk may be off the table as cool as it is.

So far, I’ve only done covers for indie authors or indie TTRPG creators. I would really love to do a cover for a YA series that would be so much fun.
I don’t know…I’d like to see you tackle “Johnny Mnemonic” or some other early-Gibson work…I can see it. But I hear ya…probably not your direction.
I’ll be honest, I’ve never heard of “Johnny Mnemonic”, apologies. I’m more of a horror or fantasy fan and rarely venture into the world of sci-fi.
It’s an early cyberpunk story, no big deal.
Shannon: The Locked Tomb is sci-fi! I also wrote a necromancer sci-fi you might be game for. It’s set in the near future, with a necromancer beautician and a man born in Anglo-Saxon England working together to save the dead from being used as an energy source. It’s called Grave Cold.

Another one for both of you: Are there examples of cover art/design recently that have made you stop and say–“I’d love to try something like that one day”?
Shannon: Oh! I just saw a special edition book cover by Danlin Zhang that took my breath away! I especially adore this type of romantic cover with a lot of botanical details and a protagonist. No shock that Danlin is also the artist behind the special edition of Fathomfolk. I super like those soft colors and expansive details. I’d love to write a fantasy that would go with these types of covers.

Savanna: Oh where to begin… J.H Williams has been working on this comic book series called Echolands and everything is in landscape orientation. Not only does this make for incredible covers, but inside are sprawling comic pages of someone just running through an unending crowd.
Don’t Go Without Me by Rosemary Valero-O’Connell, the cover is a limited color palette of purple and pink, with the main figure entirely in shadow looking out into a window of pink chaos and there’s gold foil emerging out of the pink chaotic figures.

My friends Cait May and Trevor Bream have their graphic novel out called Another Kind, the cover illustration is incredible and I got to see all the sketches before the final product, but my favorite part of the hard jacket copy is taking off the dust jacket and on the book cover are eerie green cabinet of curiosity bones of different creatures in the book and ugh I want to do something like where the cover and inside cover play off of each other so nicely.

Finally, anything by Jody A Lee. Her covers for Mercedes Lackey’s books are something I always go back to, the way she uses color and texture, I just stare at her work for hours and I love when she does little vignettes of other characters in the borders, I try to do the same in my own work.
Shannon: I had so many of those Jody A. Lee covers as a kid! I love those! The way the whole design of the illustration works, especially breaking off from the primary illustration of the protagonist, functions so perfectly as a cover design!

I appreciate the time that that Shannon and Savanna took for this. Readers, be sure to check out Shannon’s site for more about the novel, Domestication and go spend some time looking through Savanna’s portfolio. You’ll be glad you did.


A Few Quick Questions

Book Blogger Hop: Fireworks or Reading?

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This prompt was submitted by Billy @ Coffee Addicted Writer:

Which do you enjoy doing more on the 4th of July: watching fireworks light up the sky or reading an inviting book?

I know when I was younger, I enjoyed fireworks—but that ended at some point in my teens. Outside of one night at Disneyland about 18 years ago—I don’t get the appeal of them anymore. I can appreciate them for about 40 seconds nowadays.

Even if I enjoyed them, I think anyone who knows me would expect me to say “reading an inviting [or even simply not-unappealing] book” is what I enjoy more. That’s pretty much the case when the choice is “X or reading” for most values of X, truth be told.

However, on Thursday, I’ll be commemorating—as has been my habit for the last several years—Scare-The-Crap-Out-of-Your-Dog Day. It’s not that fun—and it frequently leaves me in rough shape for work the next day. But, good quality time with my dogs (even if they’re certain the word is ending) is one of those values of X that can beat reading.

Do you prefer pyrotechnics, the printed word, or perhaps another option?

PUB DAY REPOST: Dog Day Afternoon by David Rosenfelt: Understanding Marcus

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by David Rosenfelt

DETAILS:
Series: Andy Carpenter, #29
Publisher: Minotaur Books
Publication Date: July 2, 2024
Format: eARC
Length: 304 pg.
Read Date: June 20-21, 2024
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What’s Dog Day Afternoon About?

Overall, I’m not sure that the body count in this book is that much higher than in other books in this series—but the way it opens is very different. The instigating crime feels like something straight out of a mass-shooter video your HR people make you watch annually (assuming your workplace is similar to mine, I guess)—it’s cold, calculated, with a casual disregard for human life we don’t often see in this series. (Andy says something similar at one or two points).

So you’re left wondering—how does Andy get roped into representing the accused? (although many readers are going to read that scene and pick out the places the defense is going to take advantage of). This is where Marcus comes in.

Andy learned about this earlier, but we readers learn about this now—Marcus mentors young people in his neighborhood who have had a rough time of it and have run afoul of the law in the past. They need some help, some guidance, and some favors—Marcus provides this.

He also helps a couple of those he mentors to adopt a dog from the Tara Foundation. One of these two is accused of the crime—Marcus comes to Andy for help, and he gets it. That Willie also vouches for the accused helps—there’s no chance that Willie agrees to let one of their dogs go to someone capable of this crime.

That’s not evidence he can introduce in court, but it’s compelling for Andy. Now he just needs to find something that will be compelling in court.

Marcus

Marcus can’t become too well-rounded of a character—we need him in the shadows, doing things that defy belief. But we can learn more about him than we have prior to this.

We see that he can have attachments to people other than Laurie (and by extension, Andy). We see just how far he’s willing to go to help someone.

I was interested in this book because I’ve enjoyed almost every one of its predecessors enough that I don’t bother to see what they’re about before I add them to the TBR list. But once I noted that this one featured Marcus like that—my excitement grew. I love watching the character at work, and to see him in a different situation than we’re used to made my day. Also, we got just what the doctor ordered from a Marcus-centric book.

So, what did I think about Dog Day Afternoon?

I cannot believe that I’ve read 29 books in this series (plus a few in a spin-off). Twenty-nine. That’s just insane. Now, am I going to say that they’re all as fresh as they were in 2002 when Open and Shut came out? Of course not. But they have their moments when they feel that way.

* According to my logs, I read it in 2011—I’ve been with these characters for 13 years. Mind-boggling.

So, Rosenfelt has his work cut out for him to do something to keep the audience engaged. Over the last few books, he’s worked on deepening the relationship between Andy and Marcus, which has been nice. This book takes a big step forward in that. I don’t know that we’re going to see much more than this anytime soon—you need to preserve some of Marcus’ mystique to keep him nearly-superhuman in Andy’s (and the reader’s) eyes. Similarly, we readers can know Hawk a little better than when Spenser first ran into him in Promised Land—but not too much.

So, we’d better enjoy what we get here, right?

And naturally, that’s really easy. Other fun bonuses—Andy getting along with the prosecutor. Cory clearly being annoyed with Sam Willis wanting to get in on the action. Even some of the Andy and Tara interactions felt a little different (not unusually so, and not negatively). There was also the attempt of a law firm to hire the most reluctant lawyer in the world—that did bring a smile to my face.

There’s a good mix of the tried and true Andy bits, fun material with our old friends, a clever mystery, a new side of Marcus, and Rosenfelt’s trademark zippy prose. It’s easy to see why this series has gone on as long as it has—and may it continue to do so.

Can you hop on here? Absolutely—and you’ll have the fun bonus of a healthy backlist to work your way through once you get done with this one.

Disclaimer: I received a copy of this book from St. Martin’s Press via NetGalley—thanks to both for this.


4 Stars

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Grandpappy’s Corner: Under the Barnyard Light by Carla Crane Osborne, Brandon Dorman (Illustrator): A Quiet, Wintry Night’s Chores

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Under the Barnyard Light

by Carla Crane Osborne, Brandon Dorman (Illustrator)

DETAILS:
Publisher: Gogonago
Publication Date: November 17, 2020
Format: Hardcover
Length: 26 pg.
Read Date: June 29, 2024
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What’s Under the Barnyard Light About?

This book follows a young girl as she takes care of some farm chores on a cold and wintry night.

Let’s Talk about the Art for a Minute

No slight intended toward the text, but the art here is the star of the show. That’s a commentary on the art, not the text. Few authors would be able to compete (not that it’s a competition). Dorman’s just fantastic. In these pages, he combines realism with a style that will appeal to the younger readers. The colors might not be bright enough and the art “loud” enough to get the youngest readers, but he’ll draw in those north of two (I think). It looks painted, not drawn and colored.

When I checked out his website, I realized I’d held other books that he’d illustrated and/or done the covers for–several of them, actually. My kids even owned some of them growing up.

How is it to Read Aloud?

Like Every Dreaming Creature, this book seems to demand a quiet reading voice–this is a book for settling down for the night (or at least a nap).

I will admit that the first time I read this myself, I got distracted by the rhyme scheme and ended up spending more time paying attention to it and trying to suss out the pattern. Take it from me–don’t do it. Just read it line by line–or couplet by couplet–while being ready to deal with frequent non-rhyming lines. If you go looking for a pattern or a rhythm, you’ll be lost.

Just sit back, adopt a hushed tone, and read. If you do that, you’ll find it to be a nice, soothing read. The text–and the art–are gentle and cozy. You read it that way and you’ll be set.

What did the Little Critter think of It?

He seemed to like the pictures, but had no patience for the book, we only got three pages into it before he was finished. In fairness, he’s young–and I picked a wrong time to try it. He wasn’t in the mood for a quiet book.

But I’m confident that when I try again, he’ll be fine with it.

So, what did I think about Under the Barnyard Light?

I enjoyed this–it did make me think of Every Dreaming Creature and settling down for the night–it’s a quiet book, it’s a calming book. Between the atmosphere, the soft edges of the art, and the way the text carries you along–I imagine this is going to be a bedtime favorite for many. Including the grandcritter in a few months.

This definitely inclines me to read more by Osborne, I’m curious to see what she does with different kinds of stories (for example, I doubt Pony Express is the kind of book you curl up with on your way to sleep).

3 Stars

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