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GUEST POST: Grave Cold: A Cover Story by Shannon Knight

Grave ColdI started talking last week to Shannon Knight about her writing something for this blog and I was wowed by the cover of her book Grave Cold.

Before I knew what was happening, she’d volunteered to write a guest post about cover design. Longtime readers know that this is one of those things that I can read about any day of the week, so I jumped at the opportunity. Here’s the result. I hope you enjoy.

By the way, click on that cover image for a larger version, so you can see the great details that Knight put into this.


Grave Cold: A Cover Story
by Shannon Knight

Books are first judged by their covers. In trad pub, authors have little to no say in what their covers will look like. For self-pub, it’s a big part of the job. Without the marketing and distribution of the Big Five, a strong cover is paramount. Furthermore, without the genre-specific recognition of a major imprint, the need for genre clarity in a glance is also more important. Therefore, self-pub authors have the freedom of artistic chaos on their covers, but choosing the traditional cover hallmarks of their genre still makes the most marketing sense.

What do cover hallmarks even mean? If you peruse any bookstore, you’ll see patterns amongst cover styles. These patterns denote both genre and target age range. In a glance, readers should be able to see if a novel is middle grade, young adult, or adult. Likewise, they should know if it’s non-fiction, romance, mystery, literary fiction, fantasy, etc. Within fantasy, we’d also like to see if it’s epic fantasy, urban fantasy, steampunk, and so on. For example, fantasy tends to use paintings for some sub-genres and manipulated photos for others. The art style of the paintings change for the different age groups. If you haven’t really noticed before, take a look next time you’re in a book store. Additionally, we should get the mood of the book. Is it dark fantasy? Is it comedic? And, of course, there’s the story. What aspect of the story will we depict to pull prospective readers in?

All we need to do is grab the right readers’ attention. Then the cover copy or opening pages can take the next step.

There are different types of artists and graphic designers that an author can hire to create their covers. Some use stock photos and design software. Authors can look through stock photo libraries for the base images they’d like to incorporate and present those choices to the designers. The graphic designers will work to seamlessly layer images and add special effects. Often, these graphic designers will also offer pre-made covers for sale as a way of showcasing their skills. Otherwise, an author can hire an artist to paint a commissioned piece specifically designed for their book cover. After that painting is complete, a graphic artist can incorporate the typography work that transforms the painting into a book cover. Simple, right?

The rising “AI” debacle has created major waves in the book cover arena. Suddenly, generative AI is swamping stock photo sites and graphic designers’ portfolios. Where did this “new” art come from? The stolen labor of artists, degenerated into an amalgamation of mediocrity. These swindlers have broken the art down into components small enough that they hope no one will be able to say where the original art pieces were lifted from. We’re supposed to happily clap our hands and snatch the resold merchandise. We are even encouraged to claim that we’ve created the art ourselves by feeding the machine suggestions. No one has issued laws yet to try and stop us. Guess what, folks? I write sci-fi. I know a dystopian product when I see one! AI enthusiasts mean to carve away the artist from the art till all we have left is a cheap commodity tech bros can make bank on. Even the name “AI,” “artificial intelligence,” is part of the head trip we’re supposed to buy into so that we can pretend a machine and not a human was the source of the work. AI generative wpriting is the same. No special intelligence is involved. It’s a plagiarism machine built on stolen labor. Nope. Not a chance.

My book Grave Cold, which released in May 2023, is biopunk, a sub-genre of sci-fi that often uses altered photos on the covers. Therefore, I went to Shutterstock to look around. I can’t tell you how many hours over how many weeks I spent exploring the options at Shutterstock. I collected a folder of possibilities. Multiple were from the photographer I eventually chose for my cover. Kiselev Andrey Valerevich shoots dramatic photographs. By purchasing a license to use the photo, I was getting Kiselev’s work, the model’s work, whoever did her hair and make-up—multiple human artists were involved. (Dear world, please note how many artistic minds contribute to a finished artwork and the damage to our artistic ecosystem that the mass theft of AI generative products invites. Please decline that invitation. In fact, set it on fire and howl into the night that you refuse to be party to it.) For this step, I had to consider each photo, what it would reveal or suggest about Grave Cold, and what I could add to it with the typography. My runner-up photos had more of a gothic vibe, and I considered pairing them with typography designed to appear like neon lights. The photo I chose already had the color elements that the neon lights would convey. The part of my story my selected art didn’t show was the death theme within Grave Cold. That’s why I chose to place the tagline, “Protect the dead,” right across the model’s cheekbone. With her violet make-up, one might even wonder if the character depicted was alive. Perfect.Grave Cold

Biopunk tends to use sans serif fonts. I initially tried that—boring!—and then switched to a tombstone type font, feeling clever because of the cemetery connection in the story. I confess my cover looked like a fashion magazine and no one but me saw the tombstone link. Fellow author feedback concurred that the typography was a problem. So I decided to lean into the punk with a distressed font. Boycott by Ryoichi Tsunekawa of Flat-it is the title and author font, while Shortcut by Eduardo Recife of Misprinted Type, a clearer font, is the tagline type. These fonts have so much character! They emanate dystopian distress! I was an absolute fool to consider anything else! But the typography still needed a little something. After inserting half a dozen different options into the font face—frost texture, icicles, biohazard symbols—I settled on one wispy trail of spectral smoke in the V of “Grave,” and a whole column of ghostly swirl up the book spine. Unfortunately, that turned into a headache with the printer, as the printed cover wasn’t showing all of the on-screen art on the spine. Cue multiple color adjustments and reprints because the spine is what everyone sees when the book is shelved. It’s gotta look good!

The back of the book went through several changes. Initially, I’d minimized the pink. Feedback suggested that pink was code romance or YA. (This annoys me tremendously. Pink is so punk!) The back was deep blue, surrounded by frost. However, yet again, the print job did not favor the artwork. I switched to a wraparound of the front picture because a) Kiselev’s photo looks great! and b) pink is punk as hell! I drew DNA strands in a style meant to match the distressed fonts. DNA is a giant biopunk signal. I also added a light glow to the back tagline. Nice! Finally, it was done!

In a self-pub power move, I went back into my text and changed my character’s outfit to match the pink faux fur shown on the front. I knew exactly where in the story I wanted to do it. Just like that, the cover image became an excellent story match.

The Grave Cold cover contains hallmarks of biopunk sci-fi and the artistry to make you stop and stare. I love it! I think it’s a great cover. It’s my story’s job to sell the rest.

Next, I have my covers with commissioned paintings. One is space opera and the other epic fantasy. The artists are still working on them, so I’ll write about those another day, but they should release in June and July. Pretty exciting!

 


Shannon Knight is a science fiction and fantasy author living in the Pacific Northwest.

Grave Cold is a biopunk novel about the value of life and the power of taking a stand in a grim near-future world of exploitation and authoritarianism.

E-books are available on: Amazon, Apple Books, Barnes & Noble, Google Play, Kobo, Palace Marketplace, Scribd, Smashwords, Thalia, Vivlio.

If physical copies are more your thing: Paperback, Hardcover

The Only Truly Dead (Audiobook) by Rob Parker, Warren Brown: This Trilogy Ends as Strongly as it Started

The Only Truly DeadThe Only Truly Dead

by Rob Parker, Warren Brown (Narrator)

DETAILS:
Thirty Miles Trilogy, Book 3
Publisher: Audible  
Publication Date: May 18, 2023
Format: Audible Original
Length: 7 hrs., 3 min.
Read Date: May 19-22, 2023

What’s The Only Truly Dead About?

The ending of And Your Enemies Closer has changed the scene for this series—DI Iona Madison is clinging to her career by her fingernails—under investigation from the events on that roof, as anyone officer should be. But also, thanks to her old boss’ (now exposed) corruption, she has to clean her reputation, too. Those same events reshaped the criminal landscape of Manchester and Liverpool, with new leadership trying to solidify their places.

Rumors are flying about something called the Twilight Express. But no one knows what it could be—other than big. Career-making (or saving) for the police officer who derails it.

It’s risky, but Madison sees only one way to put a stop to Liverpool’s newest crime lord—bring her former DI, his brother, Brendan, in as a consultant. Brendan resists—until his teenage son starts spending too much time with his uncle.

Find out what the Twilight Express is. Stop it. Extract Dan Foley from his uncle. Clear Madison’s name. Any of those would be enough to fuel a book. All four? That’s a daunting prospect. But Foley and Madison are probably the right people for the job.

Poor Red Shirts

Throughout this series, Parker displayed a real knack for introducing (or re-introducing) a character in such a way that you just knew they might as well be wearing a security red shirt from the original Star Trek (he’d also frequently tip his hat in dialogue sometimes so you’d know someone just changed into that uniform). Frequently it annoys me when an author does that—oh, okay, I can stop caring about this character and just wait until it happens.

Parker (with an assist from Brown), however, consistently got me invested in these Red Shirts—and usually surprised me when they were killed. The fact that he did that when I was expecting it here was even more impressive.

I don’t mean to say that he does this with every character’s death—there were characters who died—or survived—that I didn’t expect. And plenty of other surprising turns and twists along the way.

A Pleasant Bonus

Readers of Parker’s Ben Bracken series will see some old friends here—Salix and his NCA team get involved, which was fun.

If you’ve never read the Bracken books, it won’t hurt your appreciation of the characters—you’ll just see them as more people working alongside Madison and Foley. It’s just nice to see some familiar faces in this setting.

What About the Narration?

It’s always important to get a good narrator for an audiobook, doubly (or triply) so when it’s an Audible Original. This is the way that audiences get to experience the book*, so it needs to be great.

Warren Brown was a perfect choice for this trilogy—and you can hear that from the opening of Far from the Tree to the close of The Only Truly Dead. I’ve failed the previous two times to have something more to say about Brown’s work, so at least I’m consistent as I struggle here—he just does a fantastic job and there’s nothing to add to that.

He seems pretty busy with the whole TV thing, but I hope he finds the time for more audiobooks—he’s great at it.

* At least for several months before Red Dog Press can put it out in print.

So, what did I think about The Only Truly Dead?

This book just didn’t stop moving—sure, it was a little slow at the beginning as Parker was setting the stage—but even then, between moving between POV characters and scenes the book had momentum. And it kept accelerating and building up energy until it became unputdownable. (circumstances required I do that with about 90 minutes to go on Friday, and the only reason I didn’t delay any longer is that I knew it was only going to get worse—it was a long weekend waiting for a chance to dive back in)

The ending was as gripping as you could want. A character or two says that it had to end this way, and they were right. As satisfying dramatically as that is—it didn’t necessarily make it easier, or less tense, to read.

The only thing I want to call foul on is the final conversation between Madison and her Acting Chief Superintendent. I want to say that it’s nonsense and that as skeptical as he is of her, no decent officer is going to act that way. But…I can’t. Because it’s probably the most authentic moment in this procedural, if only for it being full of infuriatingly bureaucratic nonsense. You’ll know the scene when you get to it.

Even if the first two books in this trilogy hadn’t hooked me—this one would’ve and would’ve impressed me (incidentally, it’s not vital to have read the previous two to enjoy this). As with the sequel, this isn’t just a repeat of the first novel—new crimes, new characters to enjoy, new and surprising levels of depravity, and a few people stepping up to do what needs to be done to push back against the darkness. A mix of hope and darkness, and a reminder that both have lasting effects.


4 Stars

MUSIC MONDAY: Journey of the Sorcerer by Eagles

Music Monday
Music Monday’s originated at The Tattooed Book Geek‘s fantastic blog and has shown up here and there since then.

Seems fitting for this week…just makes you want to grab your Sub-Etha Sens-O-Matic, a towel, and get off this rock, doesn’t it?

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BOOK SPOTLIGHT: The Goddess of Nothing at All by Cat Rector

I’m very pleased today to welcome The Write Reads Blog Tour for Cat Rector’s . If you take a look at the feed for https://twitter.com/WriteReadsTours over the next few days, you’ll see a lot of bloggers who did find the time to write interesting things about it. The Goddess of Nothing at All was a finalist for the 2022 Book Blogger’s Novel of the Year Award, so you know there’s a lot of good to be said about it–but before getting to the spotlight for it, let’s start with a word about BBNYA.

BBNYA:

BBNYA is a yearly competition where book bloggers from all over the world read and score books written by indie authors, ending with 15 finalists and one overall winner. If you are an author and wish to learn more about the BBNYA competition, you can visit the official website http://www.bbnya.com or Twitter @bbnya_official. BBNYA is brought to you in association with the @Foliosociety (if you love beautiful books, you NEED to check out their website!) and the book blogger support group @The_WriteReads.

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Book Details:

Genre: Dark Fantasy
Format: Hardcover/Paperback/Ebook
Length: 430 Page
Publication Date: October 1, 2021
The Goddess of Nothing at All Cover

About the Book:

Perhaps you know the myths.

Furious, benevolent Gods.
A tree that binds nine realms.
A hammer stronger than any weapon.
And someday, the end of everything.

But few have heard of me.

Looking back, it’s easy to know what choices I might have made differently. At least it feels that way. I might have given up on my title. Told my father he was useless, king of Gods or no, and left Asgard. Made a life somewhere else.

Maybe I would never have let Loki cross my path. Never have fallen in love.

But there’s no going back.

We were happy once.

And the price for that happiness was the end of everything.

Book Links:

Amazon Canada ~Amazon UK ~ Amazon ~ Goodreads

About the Author:

Cat RectorCat Rector grew up in a small Nova Scotian town and could often be found simultaneously reading a book and fighting off muskrats while walking home from school. She devours stories in all their forms, loves messy, morally grey characters, and writes about the horrors that we inflict on each other. After spending nearly a decade living abroad, she returned to Canada with her spouse to resume her war against the muskrats. When she’s not writing, you can find her playing video games, spending time with loved ones, or staring at her To Be Read pile like it’s going to read itself.

Epilogues for Lost Gods is the sequel to her debut novel, The Goddess of Nothing At All.

Find her on Twitter, Tiktok, and Instagram at Cat_Rector
Or visit her website, CatRector.com


My thanks to The Write Reads for the invitation to participate in this tour and the materials they provided.

BOOK SPOTLIGHT: Maybe It’s About Time by Neil Boss

I’m very pleased today to welcome The Write Reads Ultimate Blog Tour for Neil Boss’ Maybe It’s About Time! I couldn’t fit it into my reading schedule, but if you take a look at the feed for https://twitter.com/WriteReadsTours over the next few days, you’ll see a lot of bloggers who did find the time to write interesting things about it.

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Book Details:

Genre: Satire Fiction
Publisher: Matador
Format: Paperback/Ebook
Length: 552 pages
Publication Date: September 5, 2022
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About the Book:

Two people trapped in their different worlds. One by wealth and one by poverty. Twenty years working for The Firm has given Marcus Barlow everything he wants but has taken his soul in return. Finding a way to leave has become an obsession.

Claire Halford’s life hits rock bottom when she is caught stealing food from Tesco Express. Left alone by her husband with two small children and an STI, her suicide music is starting to play louder in her head.

A chance meeting brings them together. As a mystery virus from China starts to run riot across the country, their world’s collide and they find they have more in common than they knew.

Set in the early months of 2020, Maybe It’s About Time is a story about the difficulty of changing lives for the better. Starting as a funny and satirical view of the egocentric world of professional services, it gives way to a heart-warming story of an unlikely friendship that rejuvenates Marcus and Claire, giving them both hope for a better future.

Book Links:

Amazon UK ~ Amazon US ~ Goodreads

About the Author:

Neil BossI retired from a career in the corporate world in November 2019 with three objectives. To travel around the world and fly fish in the most exotic locations, to play my electric guitar better than I do and to write a novel that I could be genuinely proud of. The pandemic and lockdown in March 2020 put my first two objectives on hold leaving me no option but to start writing. Two and half years later, ‘Maybe It’s About Time’, my first novel, was published.

As a piece of work, I am incredibly proud of it. It makes me laugh and cry in equal measure. I am even more proud that readers seem to be enjoying it just as much and it is getting great reviews.

Travel and fly fishing has now started again, my guitar playing is improving and a sequel to ‘Maybe It’s About Time’ is planned to start in 2023!

Author Links:

Instagram ~ Facebook ~ Twitter ~ LinkedIn


My thanks to The Write Reads for the invitation to participate in this tour and the materials they provided.

Non-Toxic Masculinity: Recovering Healthy Male Sexuality by Zachary Wagner: A Good Step in the Right Direction

Non-Toxic MasculinityNon-Toxic Masculinity:
Recovering Healthy Male Sexuality

by Zachary Wagner

DETAILS:
Publisher: IVP
Publication Date: April 04, 2023
Format: Paperback
Length: 194 pg.
Read Date: April 23-May 7, 2023


What’s Non-Toxic Masculinity About?

This is one of those books where I could easily go on and on about the arguments and ideas presented within—and I’d like to interact with some of those a bit, too. But this isn’t the place for that—I have to remind myself again—I’ll touch on some of it, but not much.

Wagner starts by reflecting on the Purity Culture that blossomed in the 90s (and since) in Evangelicalism and Conservative Protestantism—and the not-helpful to harmful ways it has impacted the lives of men and women since then. This first part of the book defines the issues and what kind of damage they have wrought.

The next two parts look to define and construct a healthy, i.e., non-toxic mascultinity, based on a Biblical view of masculinity—redeemed masculinity to be precise. After laying out this vision, he suggests ways to implement this vision. Wagner’s idea is rooted in sanctification—not to the exclusion of other areas, but that’s not what this book is about. His view of a sanctified, or at least growing in sanctification, masculinity is not that found in the Purity Culture or some of the works around it, but something greater.

Problems with the Book

I don’t have a lot to quibble with here—my main problem is that I think too much of this book is Zachary Wagner’s story. I think it has its place in this book—and it’s important to see what got him headed down this path of investigation. But I think we got too much about him.

I can easily see other readers disagreeing with me—and perhaps seeing themselves in him and his struggles. At the very least being able to relate to them and appreciating him sharing those struggles—and how he’s come through them. And I do, too. I just think we could use 15-30% less of it.

Similarly, I do wonder if he made the same points too many times in general—maybe accented differently depending on the chapter, but on more than one occasion I wondered “didn’t he already make this point in the last chapter?” Even there, that’s something I wonder with about half the non-fiction works I read anymore, so Wagner’s just fitting in.

An Unexpected Feature

Running throughout the book, but found in a couple of places in particular, is a critique of the more problematic aspects of Every Man’s Battle, the influential work by Stephen Arterburn and Fred Stoeker.

Now, true, the book has become a whipping boy for several authors recently—but I think it’s largely deserved.

Wagner, like me, once swallowed the book and its vision of male sexuality—redeemed or not. But, Wagner argues (convincingly, I’d say) that Every Man’s Battle‘s vision sees all men as permanently adolescent, immature, and lacking any kind of self-control. But if you read Paul, he’s clear that this is not what a mature Christian should be—absolutely, no Christian will reach full maturity in this life—but if you have no more self-control as an adult as you did as a teenager, you’re missing something vital in your spiritual (as well as physical and mental) life.

That’s, of course, a very brief summary of Wagner—his critique is more thorough (and more convincing). Now, is that what I got the book for? No. Did I expect something like that? Also, no. Am I glad Wagner gave it? Yes.

So, what did I think about Non-Toxic Masculinity?

The last chapter, “Death and Resurrection: The Beauty of Redeemed Masculinity,” is a winner. It sums up everything he’s been arguing for in the whole book and then focuses it. Wagner reminds the reader that Christianity is a call to self-denial, self-sacrifice, and dying to self. This includes in the bedroom. If you haven’t been convinced before this point, you likely won’t be by this chapter, but I found the terms he framed in this last chapter in the most convicting. I’d suggest that readers who don’t agree might have missed something. Those chapters leading up to it, are almost as good, too.

Ultimately what Wagner delivers is what I wanted in last year’s How Not to Be an *SS—and then some. So just on those terms, I’m a satisfied reader. But he delivered more than just that—laying out a compelling positive case for a masculinity defined by Scriptural terms, not merely cultural—whether in lock-step with it or in reaction against it.

I can’t—and wouldn’t want to—sign off on every jot and tittle of the work. But it’s far superior to every other thing I’ve read on the subject of what it means to be a man, male sexuality, and ideas of that nature, that I’m tempted to. (although Keith Ronald Gregoire and Andrew Bauman aren’t that far off)

No matter where you fit on the spectrum of those reacting to the purity culture, it’s worth a read. It’s good to consider, and helpful to sharpen your iron.


4 Stars

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Saturday Miscellany—5/20/23

So, I saw Craig Johnson at a local bookstore last night, I’ll probably say more about that soon–but I’ll just leave it with, if you have the opportunity–take it. Even if you’ve never read him (or watched the show based on his novels). The man is a natural-born storyteller.

Before the Miscellany, let me ask one more time for questions to answer as part of my upcoming 10th Blogiversary commemoration. I’ve got some great ones already, but why not add yours to the stack?

Odds ‘n ends about books and reading that caught my eye this week. You’ve probably seen some/most/all of them, but just in case:
bullet Public Libraries Deserve Better Than Thistitle
bullet Intellectual Freedom and Why We Must Fight For It
bullet Patrick Rothfuss announced a new novella—this great bearded glacier has something coming out this year! Sure, it’s focused on a character I really don’t understand the fascination with…but so what? I’m beyond excited for this.
bullet The Work of the Audiobook
bullet All the Monsters in Jane Eyre—I don’t buy all of this piece…but I’m not sure how much I disagree with it, either. Regardless, a good read about a great book.
bullet Samantha Irby Refuses to Organize Her Piles of Books—Irby remains on my “should get around to trying list” but for some reason I clicked on this brief Q&A and really enjoyed it
bullet How To READ Audiobooks! (In 6 EASY Steps)—a handy video from Shelf Centered
bullet How Junie B. Jones Saved Dinnertime—how one book series really connected with one young reader
bullet James Cook Artwork—barely connected to the subject here…but this artwork created on typewriters is a must-see
bullet Molly Templeton has put together a list of A Few Reading Suggestions for When You Really Ought To Stop Playing Tears of the Kingdom—I thought about passing this along to one of my sons, but I think it might make him stop talking to me if I suggested something as preposterous as stopping playing it.
bullet Into Reading – The Hunger Games—1. Good post on The Hunger Games. 2. A fantastic idea for a series of posts over on Fi’s Bibliofiles…
bullet SFF Book Recs for Autism Acceptance Month—Justin Gross knows his SFF and shows it in this post
bullet 5 Reasons To Read Middle Grade Books As An Adult—I wish I’d read this post earlier in the week than I did–I tried saying some of the same things in my first abandonded post for The Manifestor Prophecy, I could’ve just referenced this and maybe saved the post.
bullet Arthurian Retellings Reading List—I’m tempted to turn this into my 2024 TBR
bullet How to Read More
bullet I feel like I should be linking to as many Wyrd and Wonder posts as I can…but why duplicate the efforts of Dear Geek Place and The Book Nook when I can just link to their Quest Logs instead?
bullet Why do moms get sidelined in SFF?—A great question that more people need to answer

This Week’s New Releases that I’m Excited About and/or You’ll Probably See Here Soon:
bullet The Only Truly Dead by Rob Parker, Narrated by: Warren Brown—the Audible Original Thirty Miles trilogy wraps up. I had to stop about an hour from the ending yesterday–which drove me nuts, but I knew if I kept going I wouldn’t be able to stop until it was done and the friend I was meeting for dinner probably would’ve been annoyed by that. If you’ve been sleeping on this series, you have no reason to any more.
bullet Harold by Steven Wright—a stream-of-consciousness novel from the POV of a 3rd grader in the 1960s over one day of school. Looks fantastic.
bullet Killing Me by Michelle Gagnon—the tagline sells it, “She escaped a serial killer. Then things got weird.” A funny (?) novel about a woman who is rescued from a serial killer, ends up in legal trouble, and runs to Vegas while being pursued by a killer. Or something along those lines…
bullet The Dog Sitter Detective by Antony Johnston—the first in a series of cozy mysteries about a retired actress turned dog-sitter/amateur detective (with a promise that nothing bad will happen to the dogs)

Some Days Getting Lost in a Book is the Best Option

The Friday 56 for 5/19/23: Questland by Carrie Vaughn

The Friday 56This is a weekly bloghop hosted by Freda’s Voice.

RULES:
The Friday 56 Grab a book, any book.
The Friday 56 Turn to Page 56 or 56% on your ereader. If you have to improvise, that is okay.
The Friday 56 Find a snippet, short and sweet.
The Friday 56 Post it.

from Page 56 of:
Questland

Questland by Carrie Vaughn

A mechanical whump vibrated under our feet.

“What was that?” Almonte said, moving her rifle to the ready.

A metallic slam clanged resoundingly, then another. A sudden, horrified realization came over me, and I looked back a her, wide-eyed.

“You know,” I said, “I didn’t check for traps.”

The ground under us dropped away, dirt and debris falling into a pit along with all of us.

The Ballad of Bonaduke—Episode 22: Animals Instinct by R. T. Slaywood: A Quick but Satisfying Episode

The Ballad of BonadukeThe Ballad of Bonaduke—
Episode 22: Animals Instinct

by R.T. Slaywood

DETAILS:
Series: The Ballad of Bonaduke, #21
Format: Kindle Vella Story
Read Date: May 18, 2023

I was reminded of the one time my father took me to a natural park…We had been walking for nearly 20 minutes in silence before we heard it shuffle through the underbrush ahead. A bear. Larger than life than [sic] and certainly bigger than any TV picture could have prepared me for. There was a switch in my head that knew immediately how dangerous it was.

The Story So Far…

A drunken Michael Bonaduke decides to use a grift (with maybe some sort of magic/magic-like “help”) to win on a scratch-off lottery ticket so he has money to buy more to drink. He pulls off whatever he did, gets his money and some booze and stumbles off into the darkness to drink himself into oblivion so he can start again the next day. He’s hit by dark memories (probably what’s driving him to the drinking) of fire, pleading, and screaming. There’s going to be a price to pay for his grift, and he’s trying to be ready.

Before then, he gets himself drunk and we get some of his tragic backstory. As he ponders this, he decides to use some of his ill-gotten-gains to buy more booze and walks into a liquor store robbery. He foils it in some sort of magical fashion, gets some more to drink, and heads off to the park to drink until he’s arrested (probably for the failed robbery). At least that’s his plan, but it gets interrupted by being hit by a car. He wakes up on some sort of short, metal bed and is unsure what’s going on. It turns out that some group is subjecting him to a test—if he passes, everything will be explained to him (and hopefully the reader, too). He passes—and is brought somewhere for answers, or maybe training, or maybe another test. Time will tell (or things are going to get really annoying). Answers aren’t quick to come—but the mysteries and questions keep piling up.

Things get hairy and Bonaduke leaves and finds himself back in the neighborhood he started from. Taking refuge in a homeless encampment, Bonaduke has to make some decisions. He starts to get his thoughts in order when the police begin a raid at the camp. During the raid, he’s apprehended by…well, we need to find out. But first, the interrogation kicks off—Bonaduke tries to work his grift to get him out, and while that effort starts off promisingly…it didn’t quite go the way he’d intended.

What’s Animals Instinct About?

Bonaduke has a quick fantasy about how he can get himself out of the station–and how it would probably go wrong.

Then he gets an unexpected assist (that will likely come with strings attached) and gets out in a very different way.

Well, that’s about it.

So, what did I think about Animals Instinct?

There were a couple of nasty typos that really took me out of the moment, and given the brevity of the episode, that’s not good at all.

This was a quick one and Slaywood acknowledges this in a note, but it does everything an episode needs to. Bonaduke gets out of the police station, we learned a little more about him, and there’s a good character moment. The story moved and it did so well.

And did we learn something about how the grift works? Mayyyybe. Now I’m excited.


3.5 Stars

Ten Reasons to NOT Read Nic Blake and the Remarkables: The Manifestor Prophecy by Angie Thomas

The Manifestor ProphecyNic Blake and the Remarkables:
The Manifestor Prophecy

by Angie Thomas

DETAILS:
Series: Nic Blake and the Remarkables, #1
Publisher: Balzer & Bray
Publication Date: April 04, 2023
Format: Hardcover
Length: 351 pg.
Read Date: May 10, 2023


So Here’s the Deal:

I’ve tried to write a favorable post about this book a couple of times now, and I’ve failed. I’ve got to get this back to the Library soon, so I need to get something done. So…here are some bullet points describing why readers should avoid the book.

What’s the Book Jacket Say about The Manifestor Prophecy

I guess, to be fair, we should start with some facts. Here’s what the jacket copy has to say:

It’s not easy being a Remarkable in the Unremarkable world. Some things are cool—like getting a pet hellhound for your twelfth birthday. Others, not so much—like not being trusted to learn magic because you might use it to take revenge on an annoying neighbor.

All Nic Blake wants is to be a powerful Manifestor like her dad. But before she has a chance to convince him to teach her the gift, a series of shocking revelations and terrifying events launch Nic and two friends on a hunt for a powerful magic tool she’s never heard of…to save her father from imprisonment for a crime she refuses to believe he committed.

From internationally bestselling superstar author Angie Thomas comes a wildly inventive, hilarious, and suspenseful new contemporary fantasy trilogy inspired by African American history and folklore, featuring a fierce, irrepressible character who will win your heart.

Reasons to Avoid It

In no particular order, just the way they occurred to me:
bullet As all good Fantasy readers know, there’s a plethora of books (especially for MG audiences) with magic systems largely based on African American myths and folklore. It’s the same old-same old here, give me some WASP-y fantasy!
bullet An MG-book featuring a strong father-daughter connection, however flawed by good intentions and human nature? Bah. Who needs that?
bullet We don’t need a respectful, but still pointed, take on a certain magical boarding school series.
bullet The fact that there’s a way for Muggles, I mean Unremarkables, to access magic on their own is such a bad idea and adds nothing new to the genre.
bullet In many ways, you get the impression (although it might not be the case) that Coogler’s Black Panther influenced this storyline and world. Of all the superhero movies, why this one?
bullet The protagonist and her best friend be prepared for their adventures because of their devoted fandom of a series of fantasy novels. Nerds shouldn’t be action heroes. They should stay in their lane.
bullet “Chosen One post-traumatic stress disorder?” Listen, the notion of a Chosen One is sacrosanct and should be treated that way.
bullet It’s a Middle-Grade book, it shouldn’t acknowledge (but not dwell on) things like issues with the prison system, racism, the Underground Railroad, the Civil Rights Movement, and so on.
bullet Protagonists (and main characters) who make mistakes—serious ones—and have to adjust their behavior are not the examples that Middle-Grade readers need.
bullet Nic Blake finds herself as part of two supportive and encouraging multi-generational communities (who don’t see eye to eye, it should be said) and gets help from both when she needs it. But it’s not just help for her—the communities help each other—largely because it’s needed, not that they get anything in return.
bullet There’s a sense of fun and joy that pervades the entire book, without detracting from the stakes, and that’s such a turn-off.

So, what did I think about The Manifestor Prophecy?

Okay, fine…there are few reasons not to read this book, really. It’s a fun world filled great characters (both minor and major), and I’m ready to read the sequel today (if only so I can have another chance at writing something about the series).


4 Stars

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