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The Friday 56 for 7/2/21: The Watchman by Rob Parker

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The Watchman

The Watchman by Rob Parker

But thankfully, the coast appears to be clear—yet, as soon as my idiot brain thinks that, I know it’s not and stop.

From the recess of the front door emerges one of the Secret Service guys, gun up. He’s fixed on Grosvenor. ‘Freeze, old man,’ he instructs.

This is the best look I’ve had at any of them so far. All black, attack vest and jet combats. Tactical sunglasses that don’t do anything apart from make you look a proper twat, and for all his supposed ocular advantage, he hasn’t seen me

The Watchman by Rob Parker: Ben in the U.S.A.

I had a little trouble finishing this on time, and hope it’s mostly coherent and typo-free. Just to be on the safe side, let me give you a quick synopsis of what follows: The Watchman is great stuff. You should go buy it now. Then come back and read what I have to say.
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The Watchman

The Watchman

by Rob Parker
Series: Ben Braken, #5

Kindle Edition, 259pg.
Lume Books, 2021

Read: June 29-30, 2021
Grab a copy from your local indie bookstore!

At some point, later, I’ll have to have a word with myself about how it got to this, but sometimes your hand is forced. There’re goodies, baddies, your side, their side. Winners get to go home, losers get dead.

And I’ve got a family I need to get back to.

What’s The Watchman About?

Ben’s benefactor, protector, ally, and almost-father-figure, William Grosvenor comes to him for a favor: go to New York and get an envelope for me. Ben can’t know what’s in the envelope, he just needs to bring it back. Grosvenor throws in an obscene payday to sweeten the deal.

Ben really doesn’t want to do this—he wants to stay at home with Carolyn and the kids. But it’s not the kind of money you can walk away from—especially with three kids to provide for—and that’s assuming Ben’s sense of duty wouldn’t oblige him to answer Grosvenor’s request.

Almost everything you can think of going wrong once he had the envelope goes wrong. Ben and his American contact find themselves on the run, they’re just not sure who from, they only know they have guns and aren’t afraid to use them. But soon, Ben’s able to summarize things like this:

This is turning into something preposterously big. The FBI, the CIA, the Secret Service, maybe Russia and perhaps my own countrymen back home – all wanting the contents of one little envelope.

Ben neglected to mention a New York Crime Family in his list, which is odd, as he says this to their head (but maybe he assumes she’s aware that she’s one of those making the situation preposterously big).

Ben and the American stay one step ahead of all these groups (by the skin of their teeth) all over an envelope they don’t understand the significance of. They move from NYC quickly to another state, and then another…and well, you get the idea. The chase is lethal, demanding, and quite likely full of treachery.

Something New in Parker’s Arsenal

In last year’s Far from the Tree, Parker used multiple perspectives quite effectively. But in the Ben Bracken series, it’s all been Ben’s first-person point of view up until this point. In The Watchman, he sprinkles in some chapters in the third-person. These chapters follow a figure called Sinclair, and it’s a long time before we have any idea about the connection between the envelope and Sinclair. But you know that he’s important right away.

It’s always risky (I think) when an author starts putting third-person chapters in a first-person narrator’s book. Parker’s use is effective, you want to know more about Sinclair—you want to understand what he’s up to and to learn more about him in general, with the curiosity about how he ties into the envelope coming in third place to the others. All three items are covered in these pages, thankfully, leaving no lingering questions.

Ben in the U.S.A.

My smile broadens irrepressibly. There’s something about this country that, while I can’t quite put my finger on it, I really enjoy. The expanse maybe. The freedom of choice. The sensation that you can have it all. No wonder immigrants have flocked to it in their droves, drunk on the idea of streets paved with gold.

Equally entertaining—and far less stressful than the rest of the book—is watching Ben’s reactions to America. He has great comments about NYC, our roads, cars, food, politics, and so on.

Ben’s been around a bit, he’s seen things, and can come across as fairly jaded sometimes. It takes a lot to impress him. Until he enters the U.S. for the first time, and then almost all of that is stripped away.

One of my favorite examples is his reaction to the idea of fried gator on a menu—both before and after ordering it—it’s just great. I wish we could read more of Ben reacting to American restaurant fare.

Actually, that’s a great idea for a short story—Ben uses some of the money he makes in this novel to bring Carolyn and the kids on an American vacation. There’s no death, no fights, no danger—just them touring a few states and eating strange things.

The Thing I Cannot Talk About

For a while, you start to wonder if the envelope is the equivalent of Marsellus Wallace’s briefcase—inside it is something that everyone wants, but no one will tell you what it is. Thankfully, that ends at some point and we get to look into it.

The contents of the envelope—and here’s where I have to be careful what I say—indicate something that’s a frequent idea in Fiction—Fiction of various genres, not just Crime Fiction. I hate it. Really. It’s over-used. Usually not used well and/or interestingly. I also usually find it fairly distasteful, yet dull. I’ve complained about it elsewhere on this blog in less-spoilery circumstances. I can count on the fingers of one hand the number of times I’ve seen it used well or interestingly—and would still have a few phalanges to spare.

That said? In The Watchman, Rob Parker pulls it off. I bought it. I was curious. I got over my initial groan once and enjoyed it. I wish I could say more, but I really can’t. So let me just say that for me, Rob Parker pulled off a feat here that few have, and should be applauded for it.

So, what did I think about The Watchman?

I started this week talking about how much of an improvement the fourth book in this series was over the others. This book is similarly an improvement over the fourth. It was just great.

For those who might care, this novel features two of the most disgusting deaths I can think of. I don’t mean to put anyone off from reading this—just know that there are two or three paragraphs you may want to skim and not think too hard about. Thomas Harris and M. W. Craven need to work a little harder to assert their dominance in the area.

There’s a reveal towards the end, that I sincerely hope wasn’t supposed to be shocking, because I think Parker pretty well telegraphed it from the opening chapters of the book. It makes sense that it shakes the characters in the novel, but no one who reads the book should be surprised (although I’m glad Parker revealed this later in the book, rather than spelling it out in a descriptive passage toward the top of the book.

Do you need to have read the previous four novels to appreciate this one? Nope. It can be read as a stand-alone, but it helps if you have read them so you understand what drives Ben—what keeps him moving forward and helps him get through the discouraging, political, or dangerous parts of his job. All that will come through if this is your first exposure to Ben, but not quite as clearly.

Parker’s outdone himself here—it’s tense, twisty, and compelling. Even when dealing with things that frequently make it hard for me to finish a book, Parker’s writing and pacing kept me turning the pages. In the end, The Watchman is going down as one of my favorite thrillers of 2021. Do yourselves a favor and pick it up.


4 Stars

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My thanks to Love Books Group for the invitation to participate in this Tour and the materials they provided.

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BOOK SPOTLIGHT: The Watchman by Rob Parker

I’m so excited to be part of this last day of the Love Books Tour for The Watchman by Rob Parker. I’ve read this whole series in the last couple of months and doing this is a great way to cap off this project. In a little while here, I’ll be giving my take on the novel. But before that, let’s take a minute and learn a little about the book, okay?

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Book Details:

Book Title: The Watchman by Rob Parker
Publisher: Lume Books
Release date: June 24, 2021
Format: Ebook/Paperback
Length: 259 pages

The Watchman

Book Blurb:

One last mission for an old friend. What could go wrong?

It’s sold as an in-and-out jaunt to The Big Apple, to pick up a harmless envelope. But when Ben Bracken is offered the assignment, he’s a little hesitant. He’s a family man now, with a duty to stay alive for his loved ones.

But, with the request coming from fellow former military man and trusted friend William Grosvenor, not to mention the eye-watering payout, one last job can’t hurt, can it?

So begins his American road trip, one that takes him from the city that never sleeps to the misty swamps of Florida. All in pursuit of one highly coveted envelope. Because it turns out, this job isn’t the walk in Central Park it was promised to be.

As he’s pursued by New York’s most dangerous mobsters, factions of federal law enforcement, and American Intelligence, Ben’s hunch is that their joint quarry must hold something of international significance.

He’s not wrong. The contents that’s slipping through these influential fingers contains evidence of the world’s biggest cover-up. Evidence that will rewrite history books and incriminate one of the most powerful men on the planet.

It’s probably best it winds up in the right hands.

The Watchman
is packed with action, underpinned with believable conspirative intrigue, world-class writing and twists you just won’t see coming.

About the Author:

Rob Parker is a married father of three, who lives in a village near Manchester, UK. Author of the Ben Bracken series A Wanted Man, Morte Point, The Penny Black and Till Morning is Nigh, The Watchman, and the standalone post-Brexit country-noir Crook’s Hollow, he enjoys a rural life on an old pig farm (now minus pigs), writing horrible things between school runs. He writes full time, as well as organizing and attending various author events across the UK, while boxing regularly for charity. Passionate about inspiring a love of the written word in young people, Rob spends a lot of time in schools across the North West, encouraging literacy, story-telling, creative writing, and how good old-fashioned hard work tends to help good things happen.

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Till Morning is Nigh by Rob Parker: It’s Not Quite the Employee Party in Nakatomi Plaza, But It’s Close

Till Morning is Nigh

Till Morning is Nigh

by Rob Parker
Series: Ben Braken, #4

Kindle Edition, 267 pg.
Lume Books, 2019

Read: June 21, 2021
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I’ve never been at a large crime scene before, moreover I’ve usually been part of their creation and have high- tailed it before the flashing lights showed up. Consequently, this is interesting. It’s a hub of activity, of urgency, of constant footsteps and the cold crackle of static.

I take a moment, and feel it.

What’s Till Morning is Nigh About?

So Ben’s got a day job (under an assumed name) working with the National Crime Agency. He’s doing some data entry work, some number crunching—and theoretically, he’s around to impart some of his special knowledge when needed.

The NCA is focused on a sudden upsurge in the drug trade in Manchester (which had experienced a good drop in criminal activity after the last time Ben was in town). So they’ve sent in an Undercover Officer. When we start this novel, that officer is dead—in a particularly vicious killing, almost performative. Ben accompanies some of his colleagues to the Crime Scene (his first out-of-the-office work), which leads to some more time out of the office—and eventually, fieldwork.

If you’ve read any of the Ben Bracken works, you have a pretty good idea what follows his being given a Field Work assignment. If you haven’t read any of these—let’s just say there are many bullets, probably some explosions, some hand-to-hand combat, and a decent number of people who end up bloody and beaten (very possibly Ben).

DCI Okpara, Maasai Warrior

There are a lot of new characters introduced in this book—and I”m not just talking suspects/targets for Ben, but allies, colleagues, etc. But DCI Okpara stands out—I’m not going to describe him much, because that’s the kind of thing that ruins the effect of meeting him in the novel. And really, who needs more than “DCI” and “Maasai Warrior” referring to the same character to not want to know more?

There’s just something special about this guy—he’s the second character this year that I’d love to see as the subject of a spin-off series. I know I’d buy at least the first three installments.

Back to His Roots

Circumstances have brought Ben back to Manchester where we first met him. I’m a little troubled about some of the details on that front, I realize as I write this, but that’s neither here nor there.

He’s back because he recognizes one of the main suspects for the killing–someone he met in A Wanted Man, other experiences he had in that novel pave the way for him to be a very effective presence for the NCA for the case. Bringing him back to the beginning at this point works well, both in terms of story and character.

I Didn’t See That Coming

Jack Reacher, Zeb Carter, Orphan X, Peter Ash–and all the other lone gunman/vigilante/hero types you can think of along these lines—have a few things in common beyond their uncanny fighting abilities and high body counts. One of those is lack of a day job—but Ben breaks the mold a little here. As I said, he has a job as a consultant for the National Crime Agency. No running around three steps ahead of the law for Ben, he is the law. Or at least consults for it.

The other relates to thing these characters have in common relates to a personal life—and wow, you’re not going to believe what’s going on for Ben there.

Approaching the Political

Ben gets a little political in response to some of what he’s forced to listen to over the course of this novel, but not much—and it’s not that preachy. But Ben does end up spending time around a group dedicated to getting Britain “back” to a purer state (read: white), which was a little hard to read*. It frequently reminded me of a UK version of Ace Atkins’ Tibbehah County.

* Just to be clear, it’s ard to read because Parker does a good job portraying that kind of bigot, not that he or Ben are bigots.

Of course, this group had a plan to take over the UK government as a means to get that pure UK. Over the last 2 years, I’ve read more books where a militant and powerful group wants to take over the British government and clean up society. This is the first one that seemed plausible—the one that might actually work in the real world. And that’s terrifying.

So, what did I think about Till Morning is Nigh?

There is indeed more than a few things that are extremely horrible about the way that the man has been quite clearly executed, but too many times I have witnessed human life reduced to nothing but tissue and pulp, the romance of the miracle of life lain exposed for what it really is. Each time I have seen someone split asunder, their contents revealed, what comes out of the person is always the same as the last. Blood and organs arranged artfully on bone. No myth, no mysticism. We are made of soft material that splits and spills, nothing more.

This. This novel right here is the payoff to the potential I saw in Ben Bracken back in A Wanted Man—I liked it, and the novels that followed, but I didn’t think they were everything the character could be. This is exactly the kind of thing I thought Ben could be, and probably a little more. Sure, Parker’s more than capable of writing a better thriller, and there’s room for Ben to grown and/or develop—I’m not saying this is the definitive Rob Parker/Ben Bracken. I’m just saying that this surpasses everything that’s come before.

I’m curious about what happens to those behind the death of the UC officer in general—but don’t foresee Parker spending time on that in the future. I’m very curious about the fallout from this on Manchester and the NCA team Ben’s associated with—assuming Parker decides to let us see that. But mostly, I can’t wait to see what comes next for Ben, in terms of story and quality. Thankfully, the next book of the series is out and I can jump into that in a day or so.*

* Also, I have to—I have a Book Tour spot for the next book on July 1. But I probably would’ve jumped in this week anyway.

Can you jump on at this point? Yeah, you could. I do think it’s worth it to get a running start with the earlier books in the series, but it’s not a deal-breaker either way. The main takeaway from this post should be that if you want to see a Thriller writer doing just about everything right and seeming to have a lot of fun with it while he’s at it—grab Till Morning is Nigh.


4 Stars

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The Friday 56 for 6/25/21: Till Morning is Nigh by Rob Parker

Between a couple of books with dull page 56s and a few Uncorrected Proofs (I don’t feel comfortable quoting from them), it’s been a while since I had something for this. But, I’m back!

The Friday 56This is a weekly bloghop hosted by Freda’s Voice.

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The Friday 56 Grab a book, any book.
The Friday 56 Turn to Page 56 or 56% on your ereader. If you have to improvise, that is okay.
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Till Morning is Nigh

Till Morning is Nigh by Rob Parker

…Broadshott is easy to keep a fix on thanks to her bobbing blonde hair, and as I get to within five yards of her, leaving the maelstrom churning behind us, a figure in jeans and a green parka steps from the crowd, arm cocked facing her. I don’t know what it is, but my moral compass won’t let anyone get hurt, and in an instant, instinct has me pouncing at the man, grabbing his arm mid hurl, and twisting him back into a heap on the floor with his arm up his back. As I drop him, a strawberry milkshake pops from his grasp, glooping all over him.

I remember this started happening back in the summer, this milkshaking of right-leaning figures. Like it was an acceptable thing to do. It’s still assault at the end of the day, and if one side is using any kind of violence to intimidate or quell the other, no matter how silly and harmless a splash of milkshake is, then you’ve run out of arguments. A failure of words is a failure of reason–and I can’t see a reason it should be done. And a milkshake is one thing. Tomorrow it could be a brick or stone, just like I thought it was today.

The Penny Black by Rob Parker: Ben Bracken Takes a Breather (for a bit)

The Penny Black

The Penny Black

by Rob Parker
Series: Ben Braken, #3

Kindle Edition, 218 pg.
Lume Books, 2020

Read: June 8-9, 2021
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What’s The Penny Black About?

After the…shall we say, extreme conclusion of Morte Point, Ben Bracken has to disappear. Not like he disappeared after he escaped from prison either—this is a whole new level. Not only does he have to hope that the several governments and criminal organizations never learn what he did, but he also has to hope that the 3 other people who know what he did don’t come looking for him.

So he assumes a name and lives in a tiny town called Horning. He gets a job that pays him just enough, he boards with an older couple (some of the nicer people you’ll ever meet). Ben takes the time to recuperate, to soak in the atmosphere, to remember what it is about people—British people, in particular—that made him love his country so much that he is what he is.

As he starts to prepare to leave this town and move on, he stumbles on to a criminal conspiracy in this quiet community. Because that’s what Ben Bracken does. Bears bear. Bees be. Ben finds conspiracies.

Ben feels like he owes people of Horning a debt because of the solace they’ve given him. So he decides to clean up town on his way out.

Things go from quiet and bad to loud and worse before long—and then it gets deafening and horrific.

So, what did I think about The Penny Black?

It wasn’t bad. It wasn’t my favorite, but there were some really good moments. The fight scenes were well done, as I’ve come to expect, and I really liked the self-reflection Ben undertakes and the steps he takes to move on with his life.

I honestly don’t have a lot to say—and I feel bad about that. It was alright. I think it’ll end up being a pivotal moment in the series, and I’m eager to see where things go from here, but I just can’t get that excited about this one.


3 Stars

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Morte Point by Rob Parker: Things Go From Worse to Worse to Much Worse for Bracken

Morte Point

Morte Point

by Rob Parker
Series: Ben Braken, #2

Kindle Edition, 218 pg.
Lume Books, 2020

Read: May 21-25, 2021
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I’m…enjoying myself.

Some people like collecting beer mats. Some like keeping tabs on birds, bugs, animals… whatever. Some like walking, running, going to the gym. We all get our kicks from somewhere. I’m open enough to enjoy all the above. But I’m never happier, nor more focused, than when I am getting shit done while the chips are down. Now, floating between the shallow rocks off the Atlantic, using my wits, guts and training to elude a mysterious force, I am in my element; my absolute, unrelenting element.

What’s Morte Point About?

Something is about to happen at Morte Point, he can’t get into details with Ben, but his police contact and his entire agency have been waved off from it by a higher power. Which just means it’s time for something unofficial to happen—enter Ben Bracken, the former soldier, escaped convict, and patriot on his one-man crusade to take on the criminals that England’s justice system can’t handle.

With only a couple of details given to him, Bracken finds his way to the North Devon coast just in time, retrieves the item he was sent for—and then has to spend the next few days eluding armed men of various skill levels, government officials with differing priorities and ethics, and nature red in tooth and claw—and a few other hazards.

Can he survive long enough to do the right thing with what he retrieved? Is there a right thing to do with it? Is Ben on his own enough, or will he have to find allies to get the job done?

Does Parker Have Something Against Ben?

The number of things that go wrong for Ben in the first 40% of this novel is pretty astounding. And by “go wrong,” I generally mean “inflict some sort of injury” to him. He’s being hunted by a group with numbers, resources, and determination; he cannot make contact with anyone he can trust; and he’s injured repeatedly (to varying degrees of seriousness). It’s bad enough that if you didn’t know there were two more books published (with one imminent), you’d start to wonder if the last half of the book was going to get a different narrator. It’s like Parker was angry about something and took it out on Ben.

Things to lighten up for him—which isn’t to say that the rest of the book is easy, the problems continue, just less frequently (but they’re of a higher degree of seriousness).

A Step too Far?

I sleep the sleep of a man who knows he has done wrong. I sleep a sleep that is deep, yet forced, unbroken yet tormented, as my subconscious pretends that what I did hasn’t happened at all. And if it did somehow happen, surely it is not time yet to wake and face it.

Not long after the physical hazards lighten up, the moral and psychological ones become more pronounced. Ben has certain ideas about what kind of person he is—so does the audience at this point. Ben takes a couple of actions that are truly disturbing, and may (should) haunt him. It certainly looks as if they will.

A lot of this kind of “wandering one-man army” type characters don’t seem to think much about their acts of violence for very long, and it seems like Ben might be an exception to the rule—and I think we need more like him. One of these morally questionable acts is fairly justifiable for a fictional action hero, but the other (the one prior to this tormented sleep)…I don’t know He has a hard time letting himself off the hook for it, and I’m pretty much with him on that one. I’m curious to see if later books see him shying away from that kind of thing.

So, what did I think about Morte Point?

Parker’s writing is crisper; while outlandish, the plot seems more grounded; on the whole, the action scenes are more convincing and exciting (although the destruction of the floating nightclub in A Wanted Man tops anything here); the characters are better fleshed out—and, when applicable, more chilling. Generally speaking, Parker took what he did in the previous novel and improved it—exactly as one would hope to see. Parker barely establishes a status quo before he proves that he’s willing to blow it all up—a gutsy move this early in a series.

However…

I can’t quite put my finger on it but something about this didn’t work as well as A Wanted Man. I think objectively, it’s probably a better novel, but subjectively, I’m not as enthused about it. I’m still diving into the next one in a day or two—I want more Ben Braken, I just also want a bit more out of the books. Nevertheless, if you’re looking for a thrill ride full of action, adrenaline, and morally complicated choices? Morte Point will deliver.


3 Stars

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The Friday 56 for 5/21/21: Morte Point by Rob Parker

The Friday 56This is a weekly bloghop hosted by Freda’s Voice

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The Friday 56 Grab a book, any book.
The Friday 56 Turn to Page 56 or 56% on your ereader. If you have to improvise, that is okay.
The Friday 56 Find a snippet, short and sweet.
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Morte Point

Morte Point by Rob Parker

I take my shoes from the pack, and put them on, ready for a light jog. I want to hit civilisation before the world wakes up, and get a march on a quicker route out.

A farmer’s wooden access gate appears on my right, which seems the perfect way for a more direct route to Mortehoe, so I hop the wooden fence into a field of cows. The song birds are in voice, welcoming me with a staccato trill. In the distance, perhaps half a kilometre away, I can see the rooftops. I run as the crow flies precisely in that direction, keeping an eye on the floor for cow muck, nimbly hopping it as I see it. It reminds me of precise foot placement in areas strewn with land-mines, this time only with smelly shoes at stake.

I rely on the timing of my activity to be the best camouflage, but fat lot of use that was back at the beach mansion. Maybe the village is a hub of activity in the early hours, especially when wound up by the search for an intruder out on the Point.

My answer is immediate and as obvious as I could ask for.

A helicopter throbs over a distant hill, the surge of its rotors suddenly louder as it enters the valley, and I see it appear over the village. I sprint for the hedgerow which frames the field, before any airborne eyes can see me.

A Wanted Man by Rob Parker: Meet Ben Bracken

A Wanted Man

A Wanted Man

by Rob Parker
Series: Ben Braken, #1

Kindle Edition, 206 pg.
Lume Books, 2017

Read: May 6-8, 2021
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Jack’s father goes missing but turns up dead in a warehouse at Manchester Airport. Shot. Who has access to firearms here in the UK? Farmers, the police, and organised crime. I can’t picture an angry pig farmer losing his shit and heading to Manchester Airport to clip someone. Nor can I especially imagine a police officer doing the same thing, although stranger things have happened. And that leaves the last one. Organised crime.

What’s A Wanted Man About?

Ben Bracken was sent to prison not that long ago, but just walked out a free man—although he wasn’t actually released (nor was he scheduled to be). He has some “insurance” to keep him from having to go back and had a little cash set aside for when he was out of prison.

His plan is to get his cash, secure his insurance policy and head off to London to get revenge on the man who got him sent to prison. But before he can do that, his friend Jack has a problem. Jack’s father was just murdered and he doesn’t see the police—or his father’s criminal associates—doing that much to find the killer. Would Ben help? Sure—especially because Jack’s also in danger as long as the killer is out there.

Before Ben can enjoy his first beer in years, he’s set on a path that will lead him to going up against two crime syndicates, and decades of history, just to get Jack both the answers and safety he needs.

A Little About Ben

But… I feel a nagging. That familiar tug of duty. I carry it everywhere with me even now, bound by it, cajoled by my gratitude to Jack…

My problem is compounded by my brittle, unique moral compass. My idea of good and bad is very black and white, with great streaks of grey smeared straight across the borders between the two– the zone in which I have been known to take matters into my own hands. Those grey areas demand I owe Jack some assistance, even if it is outside of my self-imposed remit.

Ben Bracken is yet another soldier who’s having a hard time adjusting to society after years of active duty (see also Jack Reacher, Peter Ash, John Rambo, and a couple of other characters whose names slipped my mind as I got to this point), but his sense of duty kept him trying to do good. His early attempts were less than successful, landing him in prison. Now that he’s released, he’s going to resume his quest (you can practically see him sporting Joe Pike’s tattoos—as well as living them out). Sure, he had another initial target in mind, but Jack’s situation fit his mission, so he’s able to delay his own plan and help Jack out.

But basically, you get the idea that he’s going to be another of the modern wandering samurai hero—like Reacher and Ash—just with a different kind of baggage. Namely, being an escaped prisoner in a country where the kind of weapons Reacher and Ash seem to have a steady supply of aren’t that readily available. It’s a fresh version of that character type, and I’m more than interested.

There’s more than just his criminal past to separate him from the typical wandering warrior. He’s not a technophobe, actually, he’s fairly capable when it comes to the basics of technology (once someone explains what Siri is and how to use it), but he’s not a whiz. He has a sense of humor, but he’s not cracking jokes all the time—and to say that he has issues with women is understating it, but he’ll likely move on from those.

I was pretty much sold on Ben early on, and was invested in the story—but at one point, we get this line:

I whistle a little (surprised to find my ‘go to’ whistling tune is Somewhere Over The Rainbow), and drop my pocket change noisily onto the dresser.

and I knew I liked Ben, and was probably going to be buying a few more books.

Parker’s Writing

The actual writing involved in a book is something I always think about, always take into consideration when rating a book—but it’s the thing I have the hardest part discussing. Something about Parker’s work here made me want to try it.

There’s a lot of this book that comes across as a pretty standard indie thriller. That’s not a judgment, it’s just a description. In many indie thrillers, there are repeated sections that make me wince (including novels that I like). A Wanted Man has none of those—quite the opposite, he has several sections that are just wonderful.

He can sum up a character in a few words—

The curious obsessive-compulsive aspect of this guy, which, twinned with the seemingly bottomless battery of his energy, gives his personality an almost pathological slant.

His precise, measured way of speaking seems pulled from the pages of a book, exactly how you’d picture someone of his generation learning a foreign language.

I had a few more examples in my notes, but this post is getting too long.

His ability to capture a scene or a room is even better:

I leave the motorway networks as the daylight fades and trundle through the bleak stone township of Glossop, as wild hills begin to sprout out either side of the settlement. I know where I am going, and follow the ‘V’ in the horizon where two hills meet and a road carves through: Snake Pass. Suddenly, the buildings and pavements disappear, and I’m out in the open, rolling through a picture-book patchwork of varying landscapes: undulating rugged grasslands, steep canyon drop-offs, vast forests of tall firs, and a softly lapping reservoir. You could be lost out here, but still feel in touch with the gods. It’s Lord of the Rings country, Tolkien’s inspiration. It’s Britain at its most beautiful, most powerful, most respectful.

Ben and Jack visit a floating restaurant and I could almost think I’d been there.

Sure, some of his descriptions are a bit much—I didn’t need that much detail about one man’s behavior at a urinal. No one does. But thankfully, those are few and far between (but, sure, I have a crystal clear vision of what happened there).

One more example of how good Parker can be, and then I’ll move on. At one point, Bracken visits the house he grew up in. I read the two paragraphs as he left a few times, they were just that good (and hopefully out of context you can tell that)

I walk down the path to the scuffed, mucky pavement. The gum on the concrete beneath my shoes, some of it is undoubtedly mine. My DNA lies at my feet, inseparable from my town, my past. That DNA is now the only evidence I was ever here. Thirty years of love, life, family– all reduced to a dirty bit of gum on an old pavement.

This will steel me. Toughen me. It has to. Because this would, could, should break a lesser man.

So, What Did I Think About A Wanted Man?

There’s a very “pilot episode” feel to this one—the focus is on introducing Ben Bracken, his world, his situation, and his mission. The actual story seems of secondary importance. Maybe I’m being too harsh—I likely am, but that was the impression I got.

The Epilogue shows that this isn’t just going to be a series about Ben’s quest for vengeance—there’s something else going on. Now Ben just out to get revenge on the man who sent him to prison would probably be worth sticking around to watch. But Ben doing that and the stuff from the Epilogue? Now, that’s a winning combination.

Do I recommend this? Absolutely. A great character, a compelling direction for the series, and some strong writing make up for a story that seems pretty boilerplate (but a good boilerplate, don’t get me wrong). I’m coming back for more soon, and can see these books becoming a favorite.


3.5 Stars

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The Friday 56 for 5/7/21: A Wanted Man by Rob Parker

The Friday 56This is a weekly bloghop hosted by Freda’s Voice

RULES:
The Friday 56 Grab a book, any book.
The Friday 56 Turn to Page 56 or 56% on your ereader. If you have to improvise, that is okay.
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from 56% of:
A Wanted Man

A Wanted Man by Rob Parker

We go through all the names quickly, and Jack identifies each one as one of his father’s friends or family members. He can’t identify a couple of them, but the picture is already clear. The first phone is for personal use only – a useful tool for organising the dualities of the life he had chosen.

That poses the inevitable question of the twenty-six names on phone two. Call signs or numeric pseudonyms for twenty-six people who clearly got the special treatment. How best to find out who they are, though? And of course, what was that third phone used for, if not for business or personal? That makes me question if there’s a fourth, that perhaps he had one with him when he was taken. I could ask Jack, but all three phones are identical. ‘IPhone 4S’ in black, ‘32GB’ it says on the back of each. There’s no telling them apart. Even the home screen wallpapers are the same.

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